A Footsoldier's Story Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Renamed23817 (01), Nov 21, 2010.

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  1. Not changing the setting. It's way to late into the story to do that
     
    #21 *Renamed23817 (01), Dec 17, 2010
  2. I know just for future preference please check out my new story sign up as well thank you
     
    #22 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 17, 2010
  3. I like how u choose a more "everyday" type for one of the leads. Looks like u could take this story in a million diffrent directions w ur creativity. Keep writing... I want to know how it turns out
     
    #23 CoS-Kromson, Dec 17, 2010
  4. Thank you for that. i think you just gave me some inspiration to keep writing! thank you
     
    #24 *Renamed23817 (01), Dec 18, 2010
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