A Dark Beautiful Secret

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EndlessDesire53 (01), May 18, 2013.

  1. Since you won something already, you can have 3 giant toilets…
     
  2. And here is the final part of this thing I have been writing. Most likely. This is all told by Mizuno's P.O.V. Just saying. Anyways here it is. Sorry if it seems short.

    Part 26
    I walked over to them and grabbed Kagome by the hair, throwing her to the floor. "Ow! What do you want? Can't you see I was busy?" she said angrily, rubbing her head. I looked down at her, taking the knife out. "What I want is you dead." I spoke in a low voice. I covered her mouth so her screams would be muffled. "You little slut.." I muttered, raising the knife I'm stabbing her forehead, breaking her skull. I then stabbed her chest until the knife was covered in blood. I got up and looked at Aki. He was horrified, so I gave him a smile. "Mizuno! Why did you do that?!" he demanded. "She kissed you. What else was I gonna do?" I asked innocently. "You're insane! You're a monster! I never want to see you again!" he shouted at him. Everyone must've suspected they were gone awhile so I had to act quick. Aki tried to run back to the run but I caught his hand and held the knife to his neck. "This way we can be together forever!" I whispered into Aki's ear, smiling. 



                             Few years later 


    It's been a while now. I came back home from work and sat down on the couch. A new house and a new city. I abandoned Yano and it seemed like they found out he was the killer. And he was blamed for my killings also. I laughed to myself when I remembered something. "Almost forgot.." I smiled to myself. I ran upstairs to my new room. Not much but it didn't matter. Two skulls were on the desk. I opened a duffel bag and took out a third one. Placing it near the two skulls, I smiled to myself. "Now we are all one big happy family right? Mama, Papa, me, and Aki!" I said happily, stroking the third skull. 
     
  3. A bit of a sudden ending there…
     
  4. Can my toilets be pink with white polka dots? :D
     
  5. no, its camo brow and yellow-Dont ask me how it got that way
     
  6. Thats the end..? Uhuh......
     
  7. The ending was a bit shocking and weird but the story had me hooked well done do you have any more ??
     
  8. You know what? I don't need your celebratory toilets. I'll just stick with my own, thx.
     
  9. Bleh. I've been thinking that I may make a sequel to this or whatever you call it. Or a new story. I don't know. So just either wall me, pm me, or comment here. You don't need to if you don't want to.
     
  10. Well what ever you chose keep writing the story's there really good x