A Dark Beautiful Secret

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EndlessDesire53 (01), May 18, 2013.

  1. Its really good :)
     
  2. Part 18
    Aki's P.O.V.


    I don't know what went wrong. I thought everything was going fine. But I guess I was completely wrong. I could still hear Mizuno's voice yelling at me. I couldn't help but feel this feeling. I couldn't help but fall in love with her. Even though we barely met I fell in love with her the first time I saw her. "So that's what they call love at first sight.." I said with a laugh. Although inside I was hurting. It hurts me and makes me feel bad when she yells at me. I tried to shake the pain away and continued walking home. I knew she could act mean and maybe be sometimes violent on the outside but in the inside she was a sweet girl. I just knew it. "We got a tsundere on our hands huh?" I laughed out loud. "Maybe you do.." a voice whispered in my ear. I whipped around and scanned the area. "Who's there?!" I demanded. A man stepped out of the shadows and bowed. "Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Yano Higurashi. I've come to take back Mizuno-san." he said politely. I felt anger well up inside of me. "There is no way in hell I am letting you have her!" I shouted. He laughed at me like I was joking and a serious look appeared on his face. "Is that so? Then maybe I should just keep on killing your classmates. I've already killed one. Wasn't it Ichigo Kuronuma? I also killed that other young one. Ume Hanamoto." he sneered. I froze with shock and fear. "You were the one who killed them..?" I asked, trying to keep my cool. "Yep. That was me. And if you don't want it to happen again then you better hand her over. The choice is yours." he said turning around but before he left he said one more thing. "Oh and let us keep this conversation our little secret 'kay?" he smirked and disappeared into the shadows. I punched a nearby tree ad swore. What was I going to do? I turned back around and kept walking home. "Don't worry Mizuno.. I'll protect you.." I whispered to myself. When I reached the door and twisted the knob I realized I forgot to lock it. "Shoot.." I mumbled. I entered the house quietly, making sure there were no burglars. Luckily everything seemed and looked fine and I didn't hear anything. I slammed the door behind me and ran towards my room. I shut the door behind me and collapsed onto my bed. I got a pillow and began to cry in it. Why was I crying I didn't know. There were so many possibilities. I could get hurt. My classmates could get killed. But I was mostly scared. I was scared he would take away Mizuno. I laid my head down on the pillow and sighed. I stared at the clock on my dresser. 1:30 pm. "Been a while huh... I'll just talk to her on Monday. She needs some alone time.." I said yawning. I kept on staring at it before drifting off to sleep. 
     
  3. Good story so far.
     
  4. Bump, too much potential to fall off page 1
     
  5. :p :p :D :) :cool: :shock: :eek: I love this. I need more. That isn't the end I hope :)
     
  6. More more more!
     
  7. Sorry if you guys waited a long time. Here's a new part. It may not be good so sorry.

    Part 19
    I kept on walking, not looking behind me. Why won't he leave me alone?! It's better if he does. He can possibly get hurt if he hangs out with me anymore. "It seems like he's striking again..." I whispered to myself. In no time at all I arrived home. I opened the door, not caring that the door was unlocked and someone could've broken in. I slammed the door shut and sat down on the hard wooden floor. I stared at my arm, which was covered in cuts. "I've always wanted to die...and stay dead." I whispered softly to myself. I shook the thought off, knowing I couldn't. I stood up and walked over to the kitchen, hoping to find some water. When I saw the calendar I froze in horror. Tonight was a full moon. I swore out loud and punched the fridge, leaving a big dent. "Dang it.... I never thought I would have to face a full moon ever again..." I sighed. I looked at the clock on the wall. 1:30. "The full moon will be up at 8:00. Only 7 hours and 30 minutes left..." I said quietly. I grabbed a water bottle and drank the entire bottle in 10 seconds. I sat down on the kitchen floor, trying to calm myself down. "This was normal...right? But everyone would chase me out of town...even Aki. And I would have to live with them...." I said angrily, talking to myself. Then I felt my heart drop. "If I don't go with him... He'll hurt Aki. I know he will. I just know it..." I said a little scared. I felt anger burn up inside of me. I won't let that happen. Never. Ever. I got up and walked to the couch and I passed a mirror on the wall. I thought I saw something weird so I went to check myself. I stared at myself in surprise. My eyes were crimson red. The color of a truly awakened one. I punched the mirror, not wanting to see myself. I then laughed. A laugh that could frighten anyone. "I'm already awakened. So it doesn't matter what happens in the end." I smirked. Tonight was gonna be fun. 
     
  8. Full Moon!!!!!!





















    Werewolf?











    Zombie?














    Vampire?
     
  9. ****, not another Twilight type story...
     
  10. Omg!!! Her eyes r red!!
     
  11. Part 20

    I happily packed a bag full of weapons. Just in case. "First goes hatchet, then comes machete, then comes my favorite katana..." I sang. I know it didn't rhyme or anything but it didn't matter. I remembered, I had met Aki once before. But he forgot. I was in love with him again also. We said we would be together forever. But it was a lie. This time he would be with me. By the time I was done packing, it was already 2 pm. I set my bag near the door and sat down on the couch. I had already planned out what was going to happen. I may go insane tonight however, and kill everyone. "Sorry Aki. I'm sorry that I forgot about you. That won't happen again!" I said out loud. Right after I said that, a little kid appeared next to me. "Eh? What do you want kid?" I asked, clearly annoyed. The kid was holding a doll, and she had dark black hair with bright yellow eyes. "Don't you remember... Mizuno?" she asked creepily. I tilted my head in confusion. "Remember what?" I asked, a little curious. The girl's facial expression suddenly became angry. "YOU DESTROYED IT! YOU DESTROYED OUR TOWN!" she screamed with rage. She suddenly attacked me and started punching me. "You destroyed our town...therefore I shall kill you." she said darkly, as her form began to change and she was a full grown teen. She looked younger than me, maybe about 15. My eyes grew in size as I remembered who she was. "Takano.... Kira?" I asked. She laughed and shot me a glare. "So I see you remember now? I wouldn't be surprised even if it took you a while. They did their best to erase your memories." she sneered. "I don't remember destroying any town! I've lived here my whole life!" I tried to explain but she shook her head violently. "YOU'RE LYING!!!!!" she screamed so loud I was surprised it didn't damage her throat. She threw the doll aside and began to choke me. "You killed Mama and Papa....you killed everyone. Unforgivable.... ABSOLUTELY UNFORGIVABLE!!" she yelled. I looked at her angrily and scanned the room to see if I can hit her with anything. All I saw was the remote, it was closest and it wouldn't do much but it was better than nothing. I grabbed it quickly and I jabbed her in the eye with it. Hard. She screamed and let go of me to cover her eye. I coughed violently and threw her off of me. "Take that ya damn brat!" I managed to yell. She hit the wall and stared at me with an evil look in her eye. "This is where the real battle starts.." she snarled and stood up, ready to fight. 
     
  12. Get a RPG, then we'll see the true winner
     
  13. This is still pretty good plz continue
     
  14. Wats next ?
    waiting .....
     
  15. I'm leaving for vacation tomorrow so I won't be able to post for maybe a week. I tried to make this part a long one and I tried my best to make it good... Even though it may not be. Anyways here it is.

    Part 21


    This was bad. Here was some kid claiming that I had somehow destroyed our village. And she was also picking a fight? She had no idea what was in store for her. Seemed like she got bored of waiting for me to make the first move because she quickly dashed towards me. I could see a knife in her pocket. "Making it so visible? Wonder why..." I thought in my head. She threw a punch towards me but I grabbed her fist before it could make contact with my face. "H-how?!?!" she stuttered. A grin crept on my face and I laughed. I grabbed her arm and flipped her over, her back slamming against the hard wooden floor. "I thought you were here to kill me, not lay on my floor doing nothing." I taunted. She cursed and got up quickly. She took the knife out of her pocket and pointed it at me. "You just got lucky..." she snarled. I managed to keep my laughter in before she rushed towards me. She slashed the knife towards me but I quickly dodged and punched her gut. She coughed and let go of her knife before doubling over on the floor. I picked up the knife and kicked her. "Little kid...thinking they can kill me." I growled. I picked her up by the shirt and pointed the knife towards her neck. "Any last words?" I asked sweetly. She stared at the knife, not saying a word. "Giving up so easily? Well that's no fun..." I whined. I then stabbed her arm and watched the blood trickle down. I could see she tried hard not to scream with pain. I sighed and dropped her on the floor before leaning down and stabbing her shoulder. "It's no fun if you're not going to scream..." I whispered before her eyes met mine. "I knew it...you're just a mere puppet for it..." she said a little weakly. I raised my eyebrow before stabbing her stomach. "Puppet? It? I'm who's puppet?" I asked curiously. She just shook her head, her eyes losing their bright color. "I'm sure you'll remember when I'm dead..." she said softly. I laughed insanely and stared at her. "Looks like you were all just talk! You're nothing but a weak kid!" I said, now looking at her blood. I took a quick sniff then shook my head. It wasn't my type. "Mama...Papa...don't worry...I'm coming." she mumbled. "Good bye.. Kira-chan." I smiled and delivered the finishing blow. A knife in the head. 


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    I threw her body in the hole before covering it with dirt again. Someone finding a dead person in my home...not so good. Right when I finished burying her images flashed through my mind. First people screaming, then fire, then me. I was 8 years old, lighting all the houses on fire. I had a crazed look on my face. My head throbbed with pain and the images stopped. I was on the ground panting and sweating as my vision blurred. I had to hide the shovel and I had to wash off the smell of blood on me. I tried my best to get up and throw the shovel away. But I had to crawl inside and get some soap then crawl outside towards the hose. I managed to wash myself and after I was done you could barely smell blood. I smirked and laid down on the grass. A nap wouldn't hurt...would it? 
     
  16. "Mizuno Suzuki " <--- Where the hell do I know this name from...

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