A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 13, 2011.

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  1. Nice,nice,nice
     
    #141 *WaFl3Z (01), Jul 4, 2011
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    #142 Storallelite, Jul 4, 2011
  3. Wow.. Shes an unwilling double timer
     
    #143 Empress_of_Shadows, Jul 4, 2011
  4. Isn't everyone! Blake should be put in jail for ****.
     
    #144 FeatherHunter, Jul 4, 2011
  5. ~rolls eyes~ feth, Blake hasn't raped anyone. All he did was kiss Lailah.
     
    #145 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 4, 2011
  6. Okayyy, NEXT CHAPTER IS UP!

    Enjoy!
     
    #146 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 4, 2011
  7. Great but I think the last POV of the chapter was slightly rushed.
     
    #147 Storallelite, Jul 4, 2011
  8. That...changed me. It really changed me. I've gotta listen to sad music now...
     
    #148 FeatherHunter, Jul 4, 2011
  9. Haha. She kicked Blakes ass!!!
     
    #149 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jul 4, 2011
  10. I think that one girl's story sounded A LOT like Rosalie's 
     
    #150 *iPimella (01), Jul 4, 2011
  11. Aw damn.
    iP, ya got me there. I was hoping no one was gonna notice.
    And yah stora, but I was writing it at night, and I was tired but I wanted to post it yesterday. So yeah, I just wanted to get it over and done witb
     
    #151 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 5, 2011
  12. No upload tonight :( sorry.
     
    #152 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 5, 2011
  13. Darn
     
    #153 *bobsword (01), Jul 6, 2011
  14. You know I love ur story it's magnificent can't wait for next chapter
     
    #154 Lady_Blue, Jul 7, 2011
  15. Thank u! Hopefully next chapter will be up today!
     
    #155 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 7, 2011
  16. kk
     
    #156 FeatherHunter, Jul 7, 2011
  17. Ok just posting chapter 16 NOW.
    Sorry I think it's a bit short, but it's the best I could do!
     
    #157 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 7, 2011
  18. WRITE MOAR NOW!
     
    #158 FeatherHunter, Jul 7, 2011
  19. Nope :p seriously feth its ur fault that I get writers block lol
     
    #159 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 7, 2011
  20. Lol I hope nick catches blake and blake ends up dying because nick uses his majestrae or however you spell it to totally PWN that ***** ;)
     
    #160 FeatherHunter, Jul 8, 2011
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