A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 13, 2011.

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  1. Urm were ya being sarcastic there?

    And I might be doing chapter…10? tonight. Sorry, I can't remember whether it's 10 or 11. I think it's 11 actually.

    ANYWAY, yeah, basically, I might be uploading soon. Depends what mood I'm in.
     
    #81 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 28, 2011
  2. New chappy is up!!
     
    #82 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 28, 2011
  3. Omg! Is it Blake in the doorway??
     
    #83 *Lexi (04), Jun 28, 2011
  4. Blake
     
    #84 *webs (01), Jun 28, 2011
  5. OH **** YES
     
    #85 FeatherHunter, Jun 28, 2011
  6. MORE!
     
    #86 FeatherHunter, Jun 28, 2011
  7. OH MY GOD!! ITS BLAKE!!!
     
    #87 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jun 29, 2011
  8. I originally thought it was Blake but maybe it's killer aliens !!!!!!!
    No it's probably Blake
     
    #88 *webs (01), Jun 29, 2011
  9. I think it's Lindsay Lohan 

    Amirite?
     
    #89 *iPimella (01), Jun 29, 2011
  10. Nice chapter
     
    #90 Storallelite, Jun 29, 2011
  11. Lol ;)
     
    #91 FeatherHunter, Jun 29, 2011
  12. Thanks for all of your votes guys!!
    And I'm sorry iPim, but it ain't Lindsay Lohan.

    You guys are gonna have to wait a couple of days, as I'm busy! But maybe I'll try to get the next chapter up on Friday.

    Also, I asked before, I'll ask again. Is the story moving too fast? Too slow?

    Thanks!!

    Keep reading!

    QBT
     
    #92 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 29, 2011
  13. Its moving ata nice rate.. I could write the next 'chappy' for you:)
     
    #93 Empress_of_Shadows, Jun 29, 2011
  14. Friday?? That's a long time..

    But I just realized, Blake ruins everything! He had this good thing going with her, then he goes to Britney, really? That ruined his chances there. Then he ruins the moment with nick and her! (if it is him in the doorway!)
     
    #94 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jun 29, 2011
  15. Lol
     
    #95 Empress_of_Shadows, Jun 29, 2011
  16. Lol well done EYESOFBLUE. I'm not saying anything about the doorway thing, but you have summed up what Blake has done.
     
    #96 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 29, 2011
  17. I love ur story I can guess it was Britney
     
    #97 Lady_Blue, Jun 29, 2011
  18. Ok because I'm so nice, I'm going to pos a new chapter today! Just give me a while to write it!!
     
    #98 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 29, 2011
  19. DARN IT!

    Why can't it be LiLo 
     
    #99 *iPimella (01), Jun 29, 2011
  20. IKR
     
    #100 FeatherHunter, Jun 29, 2011
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