A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 13, 2011.

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  1. Thanks memeee! So is urs!
     
    #21 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 19, 2011
  2. Amazing
     
    #22 FeatherHunter, Jun 19, 2011
  3. Great chapter
     
    #23 Storallelite, Jun 20, 2011
  4. Haha I recognize the name of the school's forest lol. It's from Eragon haha! Anyway, nice chapter. So you're Ms. Hulk? Lol jk jk.

    iZ
     
    #24 *iZlade (01), Jun 20, 2011
  5. Lol I know right iZ. I love Eragon!
     
    #25 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 20, 2011
  6. Nerds
     
    #26 FeatherHunter, Jun 20, 2011
  7. Haha whatever feth
     
    #27 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 20, 2011
  8. @FH
    Hey, don't diss the series. There DRAGONS! lol, burn. And elves lol.

    iZaln
     
    #28 Nlaz, Jun 20, 2011
  9. I hate summer camp.
     
    #29 FeatherHunter, Jun 20, 2011
  10. Interesting feth. And lol iZ. My fav character is Arya actually. Then Brom, then he died :(. And I wish that Ajihad would have stayed alive :( he was pro
     
    #30 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 20, 2011
  11. Please read my latest chapter and feedback!
     
    #31 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 20, 2011
  12. OMFG! this is amazing maddie! Seriously it's awesome! Please write more :D
     
    #32 *Lexi (04), Jun 20, 2011
  13. That is feckin amazing exuse my language
     
    #33 Lady_Blue, Jun 20, 2011
  14. I have a suggestion:
    Make it where Lalaih falls for Nick and completely ends it with Blake. Then she suddenly feels feelings for BOTH of them, and in the end she decides a THIRD guy!
     
    #34 FeatherHunter, Jun 20, 2011
  15. Not bad
     
    #35 Storallelite, Jun 21, 2011
  16. Great story
     
    #36 *webs (01), Jun 21, 2011
  17. K feth I'll think about it.
     
    #37 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 21, 2011
  18. Thanks everyone! But tell me this, do you think that it is moving too fast?
     
    #38 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 21, 2011
  19. No, I like the pace! Just...they r kinda short to be ENTIRE chapters...
     
    #39 FeatherHunter, Jun 21, 2011
  20. Yeah I know feth, but I like to update quickly.
    Its either quick updates and short chapters, or slow updates and long chapters.
    Personally, I prefer the first one.
    And that's good :) I just thought that maybe I made Lailah and Blake get together a Lil quickly.
     
    #40 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 21, 2011
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