A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 13, 2011.

  1. Oh.
    My.
    ****.

    After being grounded, I come back and find I've been betrayed!
     
  2. Mwa :D I'm so evil.

    I'm currently writing the next chapter.

    I'm so sorry it's been over a week. I was away last week, and I've been re decorating my bedroom this week. I've also been strangely exhausted every day, so I havent been on in the evenings, which is when I usually come on KaW and write and all that kajoobee :)

    Sooo…yah basically I'm sorry, and I'm writing the next chapter now.

    This story will probably go on until about chapter 60-70??? After that, I have a wicked new story line. But I'm not telling.

    For all of my Whispering Clouds readers, hopefully that will be up tomorrow.

    ~QBT~
     
  3. Ok next chapter is POSTED!!

    This chapter was kind of a nothing chapter. It was a filler really.

    Hope you enjoyed x x x once again, sorry for the HUGE wait. Hope you all still like me :(

    X
     
  4. :eek:

    I still hate it that they copulated but whatever.
     
  5. Ok this is terrible, but what does copulated mean?
     
  6. Thus chapter was goodb
     
  7. I'm leaving for 3 weeks i'm happy you at least got SOMETHING up..
     
  8. lol, copulated is the proper and not profane word for effed.
     
  9. Sorry Ordo :(

    Thanks stora :)

    Okay feth, do u mean with Lailah and Blake?


    I'm sorry to tell you that there won't be an update tonight. I need to write Whispering Clouds. Also, next week, and the week after, I'm on vacation again, and won't have Internet. So no updates then :( but I will probably write, just not update. So when I'm back, I will probably just be able to post straight away.

    Thanks! My life so busy at the moment. I'm also a bit anxious, as there's a possibility that my brother has malaria. He probably doesn't, but you can't blame me for worrying. I hope you all understand…

    ~QBT~
     
  10. Here it is, the next chapter!

    ALL FOR YOU!
     
  11. :eek:

    SLUT HOLE!

    She was promiscuous first so, nick is still in the right.
     
  12. :p

    Who knows what will happen?

    Maybe they will settle their differences?
    Maybe Lailah will fall for Blake?
    Maybe Blake will upset Lailah too, so she has nobody?!
    Maybe Lailah finds a new guy? How about her partner in Chemistry?
    Or maybe even Lailah will have to leave Sais Boarding School.

    All to be revealed soon! If you have an AMAZING story line, feel free to wall it to me!!
     
  13. Oh I love it more more more
     
  14. OMG IM SORRY IM SORRY IM SORRY IM SORRY IM SORRY…

    Ok so, the first two weeks of me not being here, I've been on holiday. THEN my Internet went down for the week I've been home.

    But I'm back and better than ever! MAYBE because I got a Pauls Boutique bag today, and shoes, and I had a Krispy Kreme doughnut (which ROCK!). Maybe that's why :p

    But yeah, I wrote another chapter while my internet was down, as I didn't get time on holiday. Might be up very soon, if not, then a couple of hours.

    This chapter is the grand wedding! Sounds normal, but NOTHING is ever 'normal' in the world of Lailah Pierce.

    Haha love y'all, and pat yourself on the back if:

    One: You still like me and my story. Well maybe not me, just my story. Because you probably hate me since I was away for so long.

    Two: You are interested enough in my story to actually read this feedback post, therefore reading this message.

    Three: You have got this far. Because this is a LONG message people.

    Kays so that's it!! I will be posting the next chapter shortly.

    X x x x x
     
  15. Yeah I didn't really think about this…

    OK GUYS CHANGE OF PLAN. IMPORTANT!!! VERY IMPORTANT!

    The guy she saw, wasn't 'Brad', although he will soon be a character. Read back to the 3rd page on my story, about I think the second chapter on there, where the big fight is, and then Lailah gets kidnapped before Blake saved her? That part? Yeah? Well, the guy who kidnapped her, was the guy who Lailah saw as she turned around in the latest chapter.

    Kays? Hope that makes sense. Wall me if it doesnt.

    Also, if you are confused, I HAVE changed my name. Like it?
     
  16. Wow I missed a lot, pretty good though. But who's Brad?(sorry I can't remember)
     
  17. I just explained?? ^^^^

    But everyone, also remember how Lailahs kidnapper mentioned that he works for someone called Brad. That might come in handy soon.
     
  18. ooh...ok sorry