A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 13, 2011.

  1. They should make this game 13
     
  2. I suppose wafi3z they should.

    And thanks for all your feedback!
     
  3. Hm just read the last few chapters, not bad...lots of love triangle stuff though.
     
  4. Duh stora. It's a teenage romance. What can you expect? ;)

    And I'm writing the next Chapter now.
     
  5. Writing then and not up yet? :(
     
  6. Sorry, will be up today. I got a bit distracted.
     
  7. Next chapter up.

    NO MORE POSTS UNTIL SATURDAY NOW! SORRY! But at least I didn't leave you with a cliffhanger huh?
     
  8. U just had to cut it off there :( But I liked the chapter lol
     
  9. Why did they go there in a taxi and then drive home in nicks car? Confusing.
     
  10. Oh…oops :D. Sorry, I wrote the chapter over two nights, so I guess I forgot!! They went home in a taxi x
     
  11. Nicks car IS the taxi they use nicks car when they dont have anyother cars to use and after the person dropped them off he got another car so he went and got that and left nicks car there:)
     
  12. if she doesn't end up with Nick I will farm u lol
     
  13. Oh I love it soooooooooooooo much pls write more soon pleeeeeaaaaaassssse
     
  14. Loll ninjataco.

    I'm back from vacation/holiday, so I'll be writing and posting more TONIGHT! (hopefully!!)
     
  15. Sorryyy, no post tonight!!

    I'm wayyy too tired, and the chapter will just be rushed, and not very good. I'll try tomorrow though!!

    Keep reading! x x x