A Changing Personality FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 13, 2011.

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  1. Lol
     
    #221 Empress_of_Shadows, Jul 17, 2011
  2. Yayyy I finally won against Ordo :)

    Mwahahahahaha EYESOFBLUE, that's exactly what I want my readers to be like :D.
     
    #222 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 17, 2011
  3. Its good but it's a bit cheesy but still I like it..
     
    #223 bellalautner, Jul 17, 2011
  4. Thanks bella :) and I know it's cheese, I do it on purpose. It makes it unique, and its a bit more realistic as well…it isn't really, but you know what I mean.

    Don't expect another post tonight. It will be tomorrow. Tonight I have to write Whispering Clouds.

    Tootle pip!

    X QBT X
     
    #224 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 17, 2011
  5. Ok hey if u don't mind try reading my naruto fan fic or bleach fan fic its k If u can't
     
    #225 bellalautner, Jul 17, 2011
  6. Sure I will, but just a bit later bella. I just need to write Whispering Clouds at the moment
     
    #226 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 17, 2011
  7. Kk thxs ur stories r still awesome
     
    #227 bellalautner, Jul 18, 2011
  8. Thanks bella :) and I didn't get time last night. I'll have I look in a couple of hours ok? I've got school, and then I'll look after that x
     
    #228 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 18, 2011
  9. Sorry, some people may be expecting a post. I'm not writing tonight, I want a break. Hopefully it will be up tomorrow though!

    X QBT X
     
    #229 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 18, 2011
  10. Aww no chapter tonight.  something like that
     
    #230 *WaFl3Z (01), Jul 19, 2011
  11. Excellent I love it so far
     
    #231 Lady_Blue, Jul 19, 2011
  12. Thanks sandy! Yeah forgot to say, next chappy up :)
     
    #232 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 19, 2011
  13. A GUNSHOT?? this story is SOOO Suspenseful! and why would Blake do that KNOWING Tessa Is going to tell her? I really hope she is truly over Blake. I don't want her with him anymore... Just Nick. Blake is never going to be forgiven for that!!!!!!! I hope it was Blake that got shot... He would deserve it.
     
    #233 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jul 19, 2011
  14. Blake is such a (beep!)er. But great story so far!!!
     
    #234 etak, Jul 20, 2011
  15. When's next post? /:)
     
    #235 etak, Jul 20, 2011
  16. Hm well she said sh knew she was a s*** but at least she hasnt with her brother.. I think.. Yet.. 0.o
     
    #236 Empress_of_Shadows, Jul 20, 2011
  17. And blake is a... :/ ... Yea.. One of them.. Although he might have done that knowing tessa would tell to see just how lialah(? I think..) would respond
     
    #237 Empress_of_Shadows, Jul 20, 2011
  18. Wow blake is a .. Hm.. Yea.. Although he might have done that knowing tessa would watch and tell just to see how lialah would respond.. However u spell her name>.>
     
    #238 Empress_of_Shadows, Jul 20, 2011
  19. I Think Blake did that knowing Tessa would tell lailah. And he probably believes that she will forgive him AGAIN.. Same with what happened with Brittany. He cheats on her, they fight awhile, then lailah gives in and forgives him.. But (hopefully) this time he isn't forgiven.. He is using her.. Even if he does say you can't use a farthen. A farthen is a lifetime commitment.. WELL BLAH BLAH TO THAT CRAP!!! he is USING her for his own personal gain
     
    #239 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jul 20, 2011
  20. And also....... How come nick was only mentioned for like... 1 second in this chappy?
     
    #240 *EYESOFBLUE (01), Jul 20, 2011
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