Re: A Changing Personality Why did you block me hmmmmm remember I wasn't the one who said mean things about you on the forums and told nobody to b my friend
Look, I'm not going to discuss this with you here. This thread is for feedback on my story ONLY. I will unblock you but I am not going to refollow you.
Meh.... I still don't realize what's going on .... they are getting attacked by angels .... ok they did something bad ... DEMONS? !!??? demons and angels are enemies .... they don't mix one= good one = bad .......
Great story so far! At the beginning I felt like there were some time gaps and it's a bit more romantic than I would normally choose but it's got a great plot line and is written pretty well!
I'm sorry angel, I'm afraid I'm not following. Hey flamingtomato. Well, I'm a girl and I love the old soppy romance books, so I really wanted to include some romance, and not just action.
Haha your name doesn't hint at it but your writing did, and hey romance is alright, you write like a girl though (that's not an insult, the girls point of view is much more detailed in terms of what they do than the guys point of view)
The part that stuck out most to me was when she first got to the school you described what she did in a way a guy never would, because a guy would never notice those subtleties otherwise it wouldn't work ever.
Yeah I get what you mean. And if I were writing a description about a female character, I most probably wouldn't write it in the way that a boy/man would.
It's all pre-written, so it definitely is finished! I'm just trying to space out the chapters a little bit.
Haha pre- writing is smart, especially considering I get into it at the beginning then always begrudgingly finish it later