A Cast of Falcons - Story

Discussion in 'Past Events' started by [ATA]Grant, Apr 7, 2016.

  1. Give us 2 equips next event part. With element you foul us.
     
  2. Part 3 was another great read. Whoever wrote that is a great writer.
     
  3. Because some of us can actually read , and do quite enjoy these stories !
     
  4. Awesome story! Does it continue?
     
  5. Lmao you're such a dumbass
     
  6. The story was good it is stopping in the middle next part tommorow
     
  7. Bad writing. Why would the proprietess of the tavern call a man a hen? That is reserved for women. Bombastic. If you can't write simply, leave the lily gilding for professionals.
     
  8. He's right, you know. I will change it immediately. Thanks for the feedback!
     
  9. Great story as usual - hope more are reading it.
     
  10. Chapter 4 was another great read. Those who don't read it are missing out.
     
  11. I am really into these stories , but a background of kaws lore would be nice , so we have a understanding of where when, etc all these and future stories are placed in such currently non exsistant lore
     
  12. Watch like a fly on the wall
     
  13. Is there a part 5?
     
  14. How many chapters altogether is a cast of falcons event ?