12 (the story!)

*Grammar unicorns you*

<3 It's okay Para.

 

Personally I'd rather be a grammar Pegasus but J3acon HAD to make it unicorns.

 

*Pegasister*

Nup. Don't watch it because I don't have the channel, actually...

 

Nor do I. And they're a season behind in UK.
YouTube all the way.

 

Blah...

Grammar pegasister sounds so much better. ._.

 

But I'm not a girl am I?
And grammar brony sounds quite frankly dumb.

 

You might be a girl o.o

Nah... Grammar brony does sound lame. ._.

 

LOV3LOV3 Please just forget what these critics r saying and keep writing and posting it up here for us people who come here to read storys for fun! thanks! ( btw please let me know when you put more up! )

 

Sigh... Nub.

 

Nubs.
Why you form some kind of society?
Can't you see you don't deserve it?

 

You guys missed an ENTIRE SEASON!?

I feel sad for you.

 

But I use YouTube Cheese.
I get the episodes a few hours after they get aired.

 

Oh.

 

This is not to be mean but you can definitely tell you are a first time writer (the writer of this piece) however you are better than most first time writers I have met. Just keep working on it girl. You will get way better and don't let people get you down, stay original.

 

Where teh next chapter?

 

Ikr

 

More please!!