Update: I am working on the next few parts. I am trying to work on the outside of the game, then post them when I have time. His week I'm swamped and the weasel boss is being a jackass. I will be on Monday because he is making me work this weekend. I may be able to post from there. Most likely not though.
Cheesemuffin, shut up. You havent bumped your story in a while, and hate everyone elses' that has potential to be a good story. Lov3Lac3, ignore bad comments and keep writing.
I haven't bumped my story, smartass, because of certain family events and because of finals around the corner, in addition to several other things I'm doing to keep my average as an A for the final report card. I don't deliberately shoot people down, either. I tell it like I see it, and no other way.
Candi is right. Before the garbage I've been seeing lately, from about a year and a half ago, there were many many BRILLIANT writers here. You wouldn't recognize iZaln, LadyMarian, or any other name I threw at you. During THAT time I was writing constantly, because I had THEM to look up to as goals. Actually, my only finished story, the fairly well-known Revolution, was written in that time. Ask around, people have heard of it. Pretty much everyone left from that group of geniuses is me, Stora, Irin, Feather, and GlooMi (rare visits). So you can take back those words and think next time you try to deny my words.