Name: Chesire Age: 15 Years Old Gender: Female Description: Long, Waist-Length Chocolate Brown Hair, Tropical-Ocean Blue Eyes. Clothes: Short Red Dress With A Black Ace And Heart On It. Red Knee-Length Boots With Black Aces And Hearts In A Corresponding Line. Black And Red Headband. Mutation: Was Introduced To A High Level Of Psychic Radiation And Now Has A Large Variety Of Psychic Abilities.
Sigh. Your grammar needs work. You're missing a few words here and there. Your story just doesn't seem to flow right for me either. Might be just me though. Tbh... I don't like it. The idea just seems bleh.
No excuses. You rush, you take the risk. You take the risk, you're responsible for your actions. YOU chose to write, and YOU chose to rush.
Name Hontiga Segrone Age 13 Gender Boy Appearance Short blonde hair with a fedora and a lime green short sleeve shirt and skinny jeans with fairly tan skin and about 5 foot 2 Personality Smart funny loving caring helpful Mutation ability to grow spikes on any part of his body to use as a weapon
Name Gringuid Age 12 Gender Girl Appearance Long flowing milk chocolate brown hair. Dark brown eyes. Blue sweatshirt and skinny jeans. Personality Fun loving caring friendly and has a short temper Mutation Hair can change shape and attack things
Name Krekos Age 17 Gender Boy Appearance Short dirty blonde hair spiked at front. Ocean blue t-shirt with a skull in center. Black biker gloves. Ripped blue jeans. With pale skin Personality Strong Destructive and deadly Mutation ability to turn into a liquid form
Name Skentar Age 24 Gender Boy Appearance Shaggy blonde hair pretty tan skin dark red t-shirt blue jeans glistening blue eyes Personality Cool funny respectful person Mutation Is unaffected by sickness and disease
Name: Lackadaisical "Lack" Mckee Age: 24 Gender: Guy Appearance: Long wavy dark green hair with black streaks. Has jet black eyes. Has piercings in his eyebrow, nose, lip, and a few in his ears. Tall and lanky. Wiry. Doesn't look very muscular but is quite strong. Personality: Silent, quiet, gentle, strong, is only funny and fun around Lica. Other: He is Lica's roommate. Mutation. He has avian DNA grafted into him. Which means he's part bird. Yes, he can fly. And yes, he has wings.