A Foot Print In the Sand

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Aug 22, 2010.

  1. It seems like someone needs a boyfriend...
     
  2. Lol bast  agreed
     
  3. Bast dont be mean iv been nice to u!
     
  4. Your stories pretty good! You should re-read before you post it though!
     
  5. Thx guys!! I write tomorro
     
  6. Ph and lady I agree
     
  7. that's pretty good I can't wait to read the rest!
     
  8. I walk to class and sit at the table Lucas quickly sits next to me. I take my books from his hands and slide them in front of me. Sitting impationtly waiting for the teacher to start class. He soon lays his head on my shoulder and growns.
    "Ugh Im so bored." I giggle at his comment and he picks up his head to kiss my forehead. Soon after a teacher walks into the room from the hallway.
    "Sorry about that everyone! I had to talk to the principal about somone in here pulling a prank on me- he quickly stares at the boy with ratty hair and a beeney on his head. He laughs a little than the teacher yells the word detention at him. I peek to the corner of my eye because I was uncomfortable with him staring by me.
    "Open the book writen by Kumo Hatchi Son!" he yells turn to the board. We all say huh? Than he says, the big red book that has a pi sign on it! I open the book and he leads us with directions. I liked this guy!
     
  9.  so far, but the grammar and spelling errors make it a little confusing.
     
  10. Yea I really suck at this
     
  11. You have a good plot so far, you just need a good editor.
     
  12. Awww man I thought it was a foot in the sand :( :'( 
     
  13. ARI U DUMP ME AND DIDNT FREAKIN TELL ME 
     
  14. Dark u idiot i told u!!!!!!!! Beside remember when we were just friends!?!?! We were never together since the break up ad if u don't get that we broke up ur being stupid!!!!
     
  15. Heh heh sry bout that...
     
  16. Footprint in the sand is a poem about a mans life with god
     
  17. Whoa seriouly  oh well im not changing my book title
     
  18. Oh more fan fiction garbage in active threads 