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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Secret-Blade, May 8, 2012.

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  1. a "book" that consists of less than 20 paragraphs is doomed to be gay
     
    #21 d_bo_assassin, May 9, 2012
  2. Like you d_bo.
     
    #22 Secret-Blade, May 10, 2012
  3. woah! now thats an original comeback!

    dont be so upset that your writing sucks. its ok, life goes on
     
    #23 SwiftFighter, May 10, 2012
  4. Secret, its too generic... Even if it is 20 paragraphs, its not any different from like anything. Ive seen so many books.

    Its almost like ur copying every book i dont like: twilight (love part between two guys), percy jackson (kids have powers), and hunger games (kids fight and have a love story)

    Open ur reading mind an read real books
     
    #24 Marodo, May 10, 2012
  5. Trust me, I'm almost positive I've read more books than you Marodo.
     
    #25 Secret-Blade, May 11, 2012
  6. ^Highly doubtful. More knowledge of books would mean a better written story.
     
    #26 cheesemuffin, May 11, 2012
  7. Ehh cheese has a point. And u probably have, but any classics or the stereotypical teen books such as twilight or the hunger games?

    Ever read lotr? The bourne series?
     
    #27 Marodo, May 11, 2012
  8. Lololololololol
     
    #28 IllIll_Jay_IllIll, May 13, 2012
  9. Hunger Games series, finished that in 2 nights. Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, Kane Chronicles, Alex Rider, Guardians of Ga'Hoole, (Reading) Secrets Of The Immortal Nicholas Flamel, etc etc.
     
    #29 Secret-Blade, May 14, 2012
  10. ... Thats why ur writing isnt great
     
    #30 Marodo, May 14, 2012
  11. Those are low-moderate level books, Secret.
     
    #31 cheesemuffin, May 14, 2012
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