Writer's Duel!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Renamed23817 (01), Dec 14, 2010.

  1. I'll go first

    The pale moonlight set on the rocky wasteland. The wildlife had all, but disappeared for the battle to begin, the sky turned a deep shade of red. No one lived here, no weapons or supplies could be found here.
     
  2. I write small stuff without description on purpose In my stories, it helps me as I like mysteries.
     
  3. Let's duel but wait 1/2 hour first I have to do sum stuff
     
  4. Accepting challenges
     
  5. I accept your challenge
     
  6. Ok I'll start

    Water people darted in and out of rocks in an excited frenzy. They had just received word about a battle. Recently the world regulation of criminal acts had set up battles that popped up all over the universe. In the underwater palace courtyard a blue light had appeared. The battle would soon take place.
     
  7. The water people stopped, the sun was setting leaving a green glow on the water. The whole city packed into the arena. The underwater battle began.
     
  8. The first competitor entered on a flash and was relieved to be able to breathe. Turning around he drew a simple sword and floated slightly off the ground. The people said nothing they had never seen such a plain warrior. But the elders saw something off key. This warrior had something that made him powerful, a hidden power that only the elders could pick out. The warrior stood and waited.
     
  9. :p i got a special mention
     
  10. As the shark entered the arena a large gasp erupted from the crowd. The shark stood upright on the sea floor it had a sharks body, but a humans head. The sharkman prepared for battle with a sparkling shield and edged sword. He let a bloodcurdling roar escape from his lips and so began an epic battle
     
  11. Scenery-We are in a house. The house has a Christmas tree and lights in the window. A family sit and play games that are layed out across the floor.under the tree there are many presents and cards.on the Walls there is brightly coloured cards. There is three stockings on the wall.
    Characters-
    Dru , girl , aged 30
    April , girl , aged 7
    Julie , girl , aged 13
    Rubin , boy , aged 9
    Kamel , boy , aged 12
    Story-
    There was a family called the meri's they they went out to buy some Christmas presents. On Christmas eve night they heard a bang and it was the run away Santa stealing their presents.......find out what happens next by asking me on my wall.
     
  12. The warrior moved with surprising speed underwater he jumps forward and back jabbing at his foe. The sharkman was good he dodged every hit, but he was getting tired and he knew he'd have to go on offense soon. Suddenly the warrior jumped back and struck the ground with his blade and another warrior crawled up from the sand. The warrior had just revealed to everyone his best attribute: Necromancy.
     
  13. The sharkman quickly reacted with his sword, stabbing the hollow soldier through its chest, the body disappered and It grabbed the soldier throwing him across the sand, It launched a frenzied attack at the real soldier, using it's teeth it tore the skin off the soldiers leg. The soldier instantly dropped to the floor as the posion surged through his blood.
     
  14. Shant, this isn't the place to post that
     
  15. You both lose


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