Writer's Duel!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Renamed23817 (01), Dec 14, 2010.

  1. nice descriptions
     
  2. Here-
    As the orange stood up u could here the screams of wassabi, apple, and cabbage, all tortured victims of....THE ORANGE
     
  3. after this duel is over
     
  4. The orange now bruised let out an " ouch that wasnt very nice " he then studied the beast and decided to annoy him by making weird annoying faces, while doin so he saw the creature reach for his eyeballs, just wat the orange wanted, for him to be blind
     
  5. The creature, agonized by the look of the faces, quickly charged the orange. It raised it's right fist and slammed downwards into the face of the fruit. It raised it's other hand and pummeled it repeatedly
     
  6. The annoying orange tickled by these immense hits laughed and laughed till his voice was agonizing himself he repeatedley said " wat up shadow ur funny hehehehehehe"
     
  7. The wendigo grabbed the nearest boulder, lifted it above it's head, and slammed it into the mouth of the creature, disabling any oral communication that it could menace
     
  8. The orange then pilled his dirt crusted shell and the boulder fell out, the orange,now annoyed my the shadow made a menecing noice that echoed throughout the shadows ears, making the beast go luney to where he hit himself
     
  9. KK IT IS RATING TIME 0-100
     
  10. That's three rounds! Let the judging begin!
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  11. Hidden-87
    Game-65
     
  12. If you ARE going to rate us it will go from 1-100 and will look like this:

    Wisdomtooth:::76
    Hidden:::80
     
  13. I think u win cause ur more pop on forums lmao
     
  14. I was kinda worried about it being biased :(
     
  15. We need an online blog to do this that way ppl that dont know us rate
     
  16. Unbiased rating
    hidden-87
    game-83