Fading Fast New characters!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Oct 22, 2010.

  1. It's an interesting character, but I feel like that ideas kinda been overused in feet times. Try changing HOW he uses the light.
     
  2. Like maybe he use light to make light animals that attack the people he wants them to
     
  3. Yeah, like solid illusions!
     
  4. Ya get what me and chesee mean
     
  5. :p when next part? :D
     
  6. Do you guys have an electric guy?
     
  7. Ummm not to my immediate tired knowledge...
     
  8. XD, well if that's true...
    Name: Luke
    Source: Ability to create not lethal, but powerful enough to knock you off your feet.
    Weakness: Darkness
    Short Bio: He is shy ( like all my other characters ) and is loyal to his allies.
    Appearance: Blond hair and electric blue eyes. Wears orange t-shirt and blue sweatpants.
     
  9. Oh for source powerful shockwaves.
     
  10. Mike is electric
     
  11. Oh. Yea it was late i didnt know
     
  12. Would my first one but how u guys put it be good 2? Lol
     
  13. I mean 2nd. Or is it third? The one with light shooting out of his hands but they way u put it.
     
  14. Ya make it diffrent not light like make the light into animals that attack people or something
     
  15. Yea i just read a book called Lies (part of a series called Gone written by Michael Grant) and it had people that could run lightspeed, teleport, make people see monsters that werent there, and heal people by touching them. Maybe these will help with characters
     
  16. Ya I read those books... They're pretty good. Hmm
     
  17. Name: Maqhyt
    Source: Ability to create animals and objects out of light that can sometimes be hazardous, but most of the time you can't even touch them, they're just a distraction.
    Weakness: Darkness
    Appearance: White hair, and hazel eyes.
    Short Bio: He is loyal to his allies. He used his powers to steal things before. And he doesn't want to tell anyone his secret.
     
  18. Name:Conrad the Comrad
    Short Story:after seeing his father die he promised to get revenge when nothing worked he tried to commit succide by injecting himself with venom and jumping into a pit of acid where he became a master marcial artist, assassin and has the power to turn into a giant snake or spider
    Weakness:Is his greatest strength venom or acid.
    Power Sources:Venom and acid injected into the bloodstream