Hmm... Zan seems like an interesting concept... So right now I'm leaning towards Horrin Rea (I forget) Zan They seem like they'll make a huge difference to the story. But one question... Are any of you submitters actually reading the story? Just checking.
This is my rush of new characters lol This ones like Marie Name: Diana Source Of Power: Pink and Purple orbs Weakness: Telekinises how ever u spell that Personality: No Mercy Appearance: Long brown hair clipped up with a pink bow with a bit of blood on it- like sachixxxs l
Hm.... Wait a sec. For those of you who say "source of power" it's NOT. It's a Source, an artificial manmade superpower. There's a difference.
Name: Daisy Source of power: Cystals Weakness: Fire Personality: Nice but a bit sarcastic Appearance: Straight blonde hair
Name: Affie (Aphrodite) SOURCE POWER: Color Weakness: Darkness Personality: Likes pretty things and is a love dove Appearance: Since she is a designer baby her hair is purple when she is k fine and it changes colors when She's angry
Her power is to color things.... I'm sorry, how does that help with the story? There's flamethrowers and invisible people, and people who can teleport, but COLORING? WTF? I'm sorry, it's just not right....
I know lol she never was supposed to be a fighter her dad and her brothers would take care of that but now she has to fend 4 her self useing a (colored) bow Lol fail
Oo! I have another char! Name: peen nix Age: 6 Source power: the ability to shoot flaming dildos out of his belly button Appearance: is bald with a sort of cone shaped head but his chin is very obvious; has massive feet that sort of resemble spheres Hehe...
Hidden - NO Pease - Still, it has to be something to do with fighting or defense that actually MAKES SENSE. Not color! I'm sorry, please make a seventh character.