Name:Jeff age:17 appearence:brownish blondish hair pale blue eyes wears his signature shades and leather jacket and torn up/worn out jeans tan but not that tan has a high and tight haircut and always is either chewing gum or has a tooth pick in his mouth brief history:when he was 16 years old his girl friend died by this man who wanted money so he killed her and took all her gold, jewlery, and money. So now when he sees a man with a gun he shoots them and takes all their belongings weakness: love
Name:cloud age:13 weapon/power:big,black sword weaknesseople with dark energy gender:male history:was adopted by the best swordsman in the world
Change Zan. His new power instead if telekinesis is to basically be able to transform into a werewolf. He can change whenever he likes, it's not really a werewolf more like a werebear. An 8 ft werebear very powerful.hope it helps with some ideas.
Yeah... Try to be original! Not werebears or teleporting, try something like time travel, or bringing inanimate things to life! Creativity inspires writing, I'm not seeing much. Sorry to say.
Name: Jabor Age: 23 Source power: controls the element of fire and wind. Can summons spirits from other dimensions that also control fire. The spirits can come in any form that they wish but they always have a reddish tint to them. Jabor is very clever and smart and always uses logic to fight his way out of trouble. History: born into a family of beggars and prostitutes but left at the tender age of 12. Eventually found a mysterious red tome that was bound with a circe with a cross on the front with a small tail twirling downwards. Inside he found foreign words enscribed in it but he somehow understood what the words meant. He read the book and over time he learned to harness spells of extreme power. Apperance: Male; dark brown hair; tall and slightly built; often wears gray robes with a deep hood. I hope you find this character usefull in your story
So what the characters already in the story are ORIGIONAL! Except Luther lol. Like andre, Fire is not origional now is it?
I mean things that aren't inthe story. Fires in it. Air is in it. But is the ability to control time or the ability to go through walls and stuff there? No. That's the kind of stuff I want to see.
Fine... I'll try again.... Name: Horrin Age: 328 Source power: Can force his way into animal's minds, corrupting and changing their bodies making them larger, fiercer and stronger. The corrupted animal can be controlled by him and will do whatever he wishes. Can also work his way into humans minds but with less of an effect. History: his birth and childhood is unknown but in his later years he was known as a hulking monster that surrounded himself with other creatures and attacked traveling caravans and people. A few years later his spotting decreased and then altogether ceased... Until one day ferocious beasts attacked a major city led by a cloaked figure with a massive battle hammer that quaked with energy. The marauders killed the inhabitants and burned the rest of the city down. Soldiers from an allied country arrived in defense but only came to see frightened animals. The leader of the raid was nowhere to be found. Horrin spent the rest of his life in the solitude of a forest. Appearance: Large in size; long gray hair; cloaked in a long hood that bares the quills of an enchanted goose; uses a massive warhammar; eyes sunk into their sockets Weakness: is very weakened without his hammer and mainly relies on paralyzing his enemies in combat