THE FINAL FLAME FEEDBACK AND DISCUSSION

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. Ty stor
     
    #21 Croluxian, Jan 10, 2011
  2. parts were well writen parts were shakey and plz coment on my incomplete story thx (spelling and gramer suck but the story is what I want u to coment on)
     
    #22 CALIFORNIA_SKATER_GIRL, Jan 10, 2011
  3. I think that the beginning was so awesome and I would be jealous if I was not in it. I will worship u till the day I get bored with kaw(never)
     
    #23 TheMysteriousBox, Jan 11, 2011
  4. So I Am Jealous but That's K
     
    #24 TheMysteriousBox, Jan 11, 2011
  5. 0.o Pease? Omg I haven't seen you forever!
     
    #25 *Spottedleaf2 (01), Jan 11, 2011
  6. Leaf!! *Air Hug*
     
    #26 TheMysteriousBox, Jan 11, 2011
  7. Ty pease. Dont worry u will be in it. I have to introduce the main characters before any sub ones
     
    #27 Croluxian, Jan 11, 2011
  8. Chapter 3 is up!!!
    Im a bit tired tonight so i didnt post too much. Sorry!
     
    #28 Croluxian, Jan 11, 2011
  9. Good again :)
     
    #29 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  10. LOL i'd like to file a complaint.lol
    I'm not thin i'm buff lol
    and I'm not around ur age
    aren't u 14 im like 17 lol
    other than that it was awesome
     
    #30 FeatherHunter, Jan 11, 2011
  11. No im 19. Plus its dark so its hard to tell. Just go along with it fh. I know i said ur thin. Just wait till tomorrow to find out why
     
    #31 Croluxian, Jan 11, 2011
  12. Lol file complaint that made me laugh
     
    #32 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  13. Awwe where's Mason :p
     
    #33 german_idiot, Jan 11, 2011
  14. how old are you really cro?
     
    #34 FeatherHunter, Jan 11, 2011
  15. German- dont worry he will be in shortly. Just buildin up the story atm
    Fh- im 15
     
    #35 Croluxian, Jan 11, 2011
  16. I knew it. I am so older lol
     
    #36 FeatherHunter, Jan 11, 2011
  17. It's ok I'm just being a smartass I do that to everyone
     
    #37 german_idiot, Jan 11, 2011
  18. Yea! I'm in it Great post, can't wait for more
     
    #38 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  19. Lol
     
    #39 FeatherHunter, Jan 12, 2011
  20. Sorry i didnt post another chapter last night. Was wrecked...
     
    #40 Croluxian, Jan 13, 2011
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