Kaw Freestyle Cypher 2015

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Static, Jan 23, 2015.

  1. Yea that got my attention too. Sick change of pace and syllables there.
     
  2. Thank you,:) I like those two lines the best as well.
     
  3. :)
     
  4. :( Someone fight meh
     
  5. Darkness is spreadin
    in my heart in this depression
    Is my past where Im headed?
    or apocalyptic armageddon?

    I keep having these visions
    everyone's dying in sickness
    blood splattered incisions
    incidental death of all Christians!

    I see the bombs exploding around
    I see dead kids roaming around
    I hear screams all through the town
    open graves all in the ground!

    I see the faces and the terror
    the scent of death in the air
    Im running and shaking in fear
    Ive never been more scared!

    Is this the end of our life?
    The visions are always at night.
    Smoke and warfare. Limited sight!
    The end is nigh. No way I can fight!

    The ending is I try to escape.
    I cannot accept dying as fate!
    I try to save others in faith
    but they die! theres never a way ):

    The last thing I see is darkness
    I cant breath. Feet stops marchin.
    Gets darker. Overwhelming nauseous!

    This is the end.

    Only coffins and cautions.
     
  6. that's dark bro
    I think you need professional help
    The way it starts yo
    Just keep that gun on the shelf
    Just keep that mess to yourself
    Hey better yet i hear it sells
    Let's capitalize on this man's misfortune
    Let's bottle his hate like a spell
    Use it to get to these kids now
    They dont understamd what we did now
    These kids'll buy albums and
    Not give a damn cuz
    They don't know the truth of it wow
    Are we really that freaking heartless
    To exploit the sadness of artists
    That we'd cannibalize those we started
    To see em inspired by that darkness
    Are we feedin em pills to rejuvinate
    Are we watching these artists
    Start losin weight
    Are we criminals or just excusing fate
    Are we killing ourselves
    Or just those we plate
    And sell to the masses like dinner, wait
    Are we choppin em up on our own today
    Is the blood on our hands
    Is there no escape?
    How the freak did we come
    To this fork in our road
    From left where we killin our own record sales
    Or right to the end where we let ships sail
    This sadness encompasses all we fail
    This mess is our own fault
    We caused this hell
     
  7. Static, I'm amazed. You use such perfectly poignant lyrics *applause*
     
  8. Wow, nice follow up Burns. Lovin it
     
  9. Thanks. That one felt pretty damn good to write
     
  10. Ok...This next ones a little dark. Written to a Linkin Park style ballad. You know, Mike/Chester duo.
     
  11. Crimson Cascade.

    This is it, the last night of my life
    Fingers curled around a sharpened knife
    This world didn't listen, kept hammering me
    Thank god, finally now its time to be free
    Tracing the scars along my weathered skin,
    Remembering now how, I let it begin.

    Crimson cascade
    Let the pain slip away
    Watch old scars just fade
    Get through one more day
    So new scars are made
    Thats the price that I
    (Pay)
    Pay attention now, this is serious
    The wounds are shallow but grevious
    need for release sends me delirious
    To everything else im oblivous
    Couldnt take the days stress
    Society puts me to the test
    Feel like a failure, I confess
    The rage and hate builds unless
    I find a way to let it out,
    Siphon off my fear and doubt
    A sharpened blades my only route
    To a
    Crimson cascade
    Let the pain slip away
    Watchin old scars just fade
    Get through one more day
    So a new scar is made
    Thats the price that I pay.

    Pay to be, a man being able to walk the street
    To be able to stand up and take the heat
    Shame on the inside, I'm a cheat
    Can't take it so I admit defeat.
    Coz the problems this, this razored bliss
    Its not enough, this knife edged kiss.
    poised upon the edge of the abyss
    Frustration up and shakes its fist
    Left below, I'm lost, helpless
    Desperation ? I felt this!
    And the only way out is this, a

    Crimson cascade,
    The pain's here to stay
    As the scars finally fade
    The end of my day
    One last scar to be made
    That's my debt finally paid
    With my crimson cascade.
     
  12. linkin parks not dark 0.0 I feel it's more uplifting than anything.
     
  13. Ok. Two seperate comments there your mixing up. One, my song is a little dark. And two, the music to it is somewhat reminiscent of a Linkin Park one to me. Also, while some of their stuff is uplifting, others do have a darker tone. Crawling, Breaking the Habit(watch the video), Carousel, Part of Me, Rising Tied's Kenji. The list goes on.
     
  14. The cutters anthem. Nice job.
     
  15. Ikr, just to make it clear, I aint suicidal, or cutting anymore. Its just something that bubbled up yesterday and I just let it out
     
  16. This is what you'd call a bump
    I'm bumping this thread
    I would make this rhyme
    But I'm not, scrubs
     
  17. Been a few days, I guess its hiatus.
    contemplating pain with some stray cuts
    with the razor I can play tough
    and wake up and not have to say much!

    I can talk, but wouldn't if I could.
    Lately Im shut off and not feeling so good.
    I can relate better with blood
    cuz pain is a flood & stained is the wood

    on the floor of what's committed
    lies my sins and what's forgiven
    all the blood runs out the living
    I can finally escape this prison!

    And as Im laying here driftin away
    I call her name as I'm slippin away
    she left me the last gift of pain

    My very last thought was kissin her face
     
  18. rap rap rap rap rap rap rap rap
     
  19. This ain't rap y'all killin the vibe here with all the sentimental type suicidal thought raps