No point in bumping. It's at the top already. Bump stands for bring up my post. You can't bump it any more that it is. Seriously, read the stickied guides. It'll help you story look a WHOLE lot better.
No they don't. I don't know what game y'all come from, but in KaW's Version of Fan Fiction, writer's write whenever they want. Bump is never used for an update.
It's good, but you could do with making a feedback thread? Also, you seem to be making the same mistake… You write; "…I should be the one apologising."Amy laughed softly… It should be; "…I should be the one apologising." Amy laughed softly… Do you see what I mean? I left a gap in between the closing speech marks and Amy. Thought this might help
She's from the UK so ST*U. Lmao, jk. But seriously, don't talk about the way people spell if you don't know where they're from.
I don't get why everyone likes this story. It's poorly written and rushed. No background information has been given, adjectives are being improperly used, and conventions are being misused.
Dude, this isnt supposed to be a new york best seller. It's just a dude whos writing stuff down to make a simple story to see what they say.
Read the other stories in Fan Fiction. Second page if fan fic, The Legend of KaW - FeatherHunter's Version. Don't post on that thread. When you're done reading, go to the first page of fan fiction and look for the feedback thread for LoKaW. After that, leave some feedback. You'll see what I mean when I say this dude needs to read some guides on becoming a better writer.
Feather hunter UR not the boss around here, everyone has the right of creativity, IT'S NOT A #1 SELLING NOVEL IN THE WORLD BUT IT'S BETTER THAN THE CRAP U WRITE!
I've been in Fan Fiction for over a month and a year. I know what I'm talking about. I'm just saying this story could be a lot better via the writing guide by GIoomi. Never said I was the boss. Never said it was a number #1 best seller, far from it in fact. Just trying to be helpful.