Love Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *BubbleCake- (01), Dec 30, 2011.

  1. Read my story Popularity!! Please and thx!
     
  2. Amy was dragged by the girls.She screamed loud so someone could hear her.

    "Let me go!!I'm not dating your friend's boyfriend!!"Amy screamed so painfully.

    "Yeah right.We're never going to believe you."Birtney said snapping her fingers.

    "I'll explain to you!"Amy shouted looking at Britney carefully,but she didn't answer,until a car came by and a guy came out of it,and it was Joshua.

    "Britney,what are you girls doing?"Joshua looked at Amy and then at Britney,so the girls and she let go of Amy's arms.

    "Oh..Uhm..Nothing Josh.Just doing something."Britney smiled slowly,and Amy ran to Joshua.

    "Amy,what were they doing?"Joshua looked at Amy in the eyes.

    "I don't know.Your girlfriend told me that you and me are dating!"Amy said backing away from him.

    "What?!We're not dating!We're just friends."Joshua looked at Britney angrily.

    "Where's Ashley?"Joshua said clenching a fist.

    "She..Uhm.."Britney was afraid Joshua might punch her.

    "Where is she?!"Joshua said going back to his car.

    "She..Went home."Britney said tryig to smile.Amy was just standing waiting for Joshua.

    "Amy,come in."Joshua said opening up a door for Amy,so she went inside,closed the door,and Joshua drived.

    "Where are we going?"Amy asked looking out the window.

    "Ashley's."Joshua answered still driving.Amy was still looking out the window.
     
  3. It's really good! Srry about chat :(
     
  4. The story is really well written! I think sometime in the story u should say y Ashley is reacting like this! Anyways keep up the good work!!
     
  5. Joshua and Amy was waiting outside Ashley's house to open the door,so he rang the bell again and the door opened,and Ashley came out.She looked at Amy disgustingly and angrily,and Joshua looks at Amy.

    "Amy,can you wait in the car for a few minutes?"Joshua asked softly.

    "Sure."Amy turned around and walked around to go in the car to wait while Ashley and Joshua was talking.Ashley let Joshua go inside.

    "Uhm..So..What are you doing here?"Ashley asked carefully.

    "I got to tell you something."Joshua sat on the sofa and looked at Ashley.

    "What?"Ashley asked sitting down beside him.

    "Uhm..This isn't going to be easy."Joshua said slowly.

    "Just tell me Josh."Ashley said smiling.

    "Uhm..I..I..I'm breaking up with you."Joshua was disappointed but it was the right thing to do.

    "What?!Why?"Ashley said standing up and looking at Joshua.

    "It's just that your mean to Amy and she's only my friend.You thought I was dating her but I wasn't!We're only friends!"Joshua said standing up too and looking at Ashley sadly.

    "Yeah.Because you only care about her!Not me."Ashley said sadly.

    "Yeah.Because she's my friend."Joshua walking away.

    "Oh..."Ashley said sitting down again.Joshua looked out the window and saw Amy alone.

    "Look,I have to go.I'll see you tomorrow."Joshua said walking out the door and going to his car.

    "Wait."Ashley stopped him."There's one more thing I need to do."

    "What?"Joshua asked turning around.

    Ashley looked Joshua in the eyes and kissed him.

    "Well,bye."Ashley said letting go.Joshua walked disappointedly again.

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    Sean walked and walked until he saw his sister sitting alone in a car,so he ran to the car and called out for Amy.

    "Amy!Mom said to come home!I've been looking for you!"Sean said trinf to open the door.Joshua came,unlocked the door,and looks at Sean and then at Amy.

    "Who is he?"Joshua asked looking at Sean.

    "My brother."Amy got out of the car and she ran to her brother and hugged him.

    "Oh.Are you walking with him?Or riding with me?"Joshua asked putting a hand in his pocket.Amy looked at Sean ad he nodded.

    "Can he come with us?"Amy asked opening up the door again.

    "Sure."Joshua smiled and Sean went in,and Joshua drived.
     
  6. Sorry for the mistakes.I was in a hurry
     
  7. Great story
     
  8. Thnx


    U can sign up a character on love story sign up..
     
  9. It's fine, but it's really good
     
  10. Thnx.I dnt know any more ideas
     
  11. Pretty good though it needs more....action if they love each other they need to go through thick and thin for each other
     
  12. Hey, why don't you get a newspaper column/story to put this stuff in it is some excellent stuff
     
  13. Next day,Amy and Joshua was in class early.The bell rang slowly and everybody ran out to lunch,until Mrs.Byrd called for Amy again.

    "Amy!"She shouted,and Amy turned around to go talk to Mrs.Byrd.

    "Yes Mrs.Byrd?"Amy asked innocently.

    "You've been behaving right?"Mrs.Byrd said smiling.

    "Yes Mrs.Byrd."Amy smiled.

    "Well,I want you to go to the principal's office and Mr.Johnson will tell you something important."Mrs.Byrd said softly.

    "Okay.Thank you Mrs.Byrd."Amy walked away to the principal's office excited.When she got there,she saw Joshua sitting down on a chair,and he grinned at Amy.

    "Are you Ms.Xander?"The principal asked smiling.

    "Yes."Amy answered sitting down.

    "Well,I'm sending you to another class."The principal said still smiling.

    "Who's class?"Amy asked looking at Joshua.

    "I want you to go with Joshua.He's in the same class with u now."The principal said grinning.Amy looked at Joshua and smiled too.

    "Joshua,would you like to introduce yourself to Ms.Xander?"The principal said.

    "We already introduced ourselves."Joshua said smiling at Amy.

    "Oh,okay.Well,you kids go to lunch now."The principal said standing up.

    Amy and Joshua stood up from their chairs,walked out,and Joshua looked at Amy.

    "See you later?"He asked getting his backpack on the floor.

    "Sure."Amy said smiling.

    "Okay."Joshua walked away and Amy was just standing in the hallway.

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    Joshua walked to lunch when a guy friend of Ashley came up to him.

    "You Ashley's boyfriend?"The guy asked slowly.

    "Ex-boyfriend.Why?"Joshua said trying to get out of the guy's way,but he stopped him."Uhm..Can you get out of my way?"

    "Ashley misses you and doesn't want you to be dating a girl name Ally?"The guy said clenching a fist.

    "Amy.And I'm not dating her.I just told Ashley that yesterday."Joshua said still trying to get out of his way.

    "Look,just get back together with her or else."The guy said getting angry.

    "Or else what?"Joshua said raising up an eyebrow.The guy came closer and closer to Joshua and punched him until Amy and Sean came and saw what was happening,so Amy and Sean ran where the guy and Joshua was fighting.
    "Leave him alone whatever your name is!"Amy yelling and trying to help Joshua stand up but the guy wouldn't let her.

    "Dude!Just let him go or your going to be in big trouble!"Sean stood up for Joshua until the guy let go of him and looked at Sean.

    "Really?"The guy said clenching up his fists.Now Sean was scared.

    "Just leave him alone you big jerk!"Amy shouted at the guy,so he looked at her and was angry.

    "You can't stop me."He said turning red.Sean stood up again for Amy and Joshua and he was really really angry!

    "Leave them alone!Your like a big baby!"Sean said insulting the guy while Amy was helping Joshua up.

    "Fine.Next time,your going to be in trouble."The guy walked away angrily and still clenching up his fists.Sean looked at Amy and Joshua.Amy was still helping Joshua up and Sean laughed.

    "Seems like you guys have a big crush on each other."Sean laughed softly,and Amy looked at him seriously.

    "Just go to your table Sean!"Amy hissed.

    "Okay,okay."Sean turned and walked away to his table.
     
  14. After school,Mandy went to Sean and Amy's house to do her project.She knocked on the door and AWhy don't you make Mandy Ashleys sister and Mandy is over doing a project with Sean at his and Amy's house. Then Ashley could come to pick her up because she figured out she was at Amy's house and Mandy refuses to leave?my opened the door.

    "Hi Amy.Can I do my project here?"Mandy said innocently looking around the house.

    "Sure.Come in."Amy said and Mansy went in and saw Sean.

    "Hey Mandy."Sean said sitting on the couch eating.
     
  15. You just copied and pasted what I told you! Don't you know how weird that looks?!?!