Here's a little update sorry it isnt much ***Jaden's POV*** I have to make her mine. I want her so badly! But, I also want someone else. I'm so stuck. I want Vanessa but I also want that someone else. I sighed and leaned back into my chair ignoring every word my teacher was saying. The imprinted dots on the ceiling tiles getting my dizzy. I sat up and laid my head on my desk. -Ring!!- I jumped up and darted out the room. My memory of what happened before class replayed. I held Nessa close. She smelled amazing. Her dark hakr was so soft and smelled like a waterfall. But, images of Nessa slowly faded. And my mind focused on her. That someone else. Joanne. "Hey Jay!" I heard that soothing seductive voice. "Joanne..." "How are you hun?" "I'm alright and you." "I'm great." She was so sweet. Her auburn red hair. Her light gray eyes, Her warm smile. She was fairly tall. Around 5'7 or 5'9. We hugged and walked down to the cafe. Joanne always made me laugh. I sat at a table and waited for her to come back with her lunch. "Jaden Mark McAdams!" "Vanessa Leanne Martinez!" I laughed when she gave me an irritated look. She couldn't help but smile. That perfect smile. She looked amazing. The way her bangs fell carelessly in her eyes no matter how many times she pushed them back. Her soft lips moving in slow motion in my mind. Wow this girl is amazing! "So Mr.McAdams what are you doing alone?" "Oh nothing just waiting for someone." "Oh....ummm.... Who?" "This girl I know named Joanne." Her face looked flushed. And her expression grew dark. She looked away from and stood straightening her oversized sweater. She glanced at me and smiled her sweet smile. She makes my heart skip a beat when she's jealous. Its so adorable. "What? You jealous Nessa?" I asked with a smirk. "Jealousy is not my fortae." "Hmm sure Martinez." "I'll see you later McAdams." With that she sashayed away swaying her hips away and back to her friends as always. The rythem in her hips had me memorized. I think Joanne noticed when she came back. "Girlfriend of yours?" She snarled "No just a friend." "Ok good." She smiled I smiled at Joanne knowing that I should pick one or the other. They both like me and I like both of them. Joanne confessed to me a year ago and we became friends. Nessa on the other hand was never good at hiding who she liked. Whenever that person was near her hands would get sweaty her face would be cherry red and she would fumble on her words like an adorably she little girl. I didn't like where this was going. I needed to do something before it was to late. Is Vanessa jealous? Is Joanne becoming possessive?! Who will Jaden choose?? Pr what will he do?!
Sorry It's not a big update :/ ***Jaden's POV*** I have to make her mine. I want her so badly! But, I also want someone else. I'm so stuck. I want Vanessa but I also want that someone else. I sighed and leaned back into my chair ignoring every word my teacher was saying. The imprinted dots on the ceiling tiles getting my dizzy. I sat up and laid my head on my desk. -Ring!!- I jumped up and darted out the room. My memory of what happened before class replayed. I held Nessa close. She smelled amazing. Her dark hakr was so soft and smelled like a waterfall. But, images of Nessa slowly faded. And my mind focused on her. That someone else. Joanne. "Hey Jay!" I heard that soothing seductive voice. "Joanne..." "How are you hun?" "I'm alright and you." "I'm great." She was so sweet. Her auburn red hair. Her light gray eyes, Her warm smile. She was fairly tall. Around 5'7 or 5'9. We hugged and walked down to the cafe. Joanne always made me laugh. I sat at a table and waited for her to come back with her lunch. "Jaden Mark McAdams!" "Vanessa Leanne Martinez!" I laughed when she gave me an irritated look. She couldn't help but smile. That perfect smile. She looked amazing. The way her bangs fell carelessly in her eyes no matter how many times she pushed them back. Her soft lips moving in slow motion in my mind. Wow this girl is amazing! "So Mr.McAdams what are you doing alone?" "Oh nothing just waiting for someone." "Oh....ummm.... Who?" "This girl I know named Joanne." Her face looked flushed. And her expression grew dark. She looked away from and stood straightening her oversized sweater. She glanced at me and smiled her sweet smile. She makes my heart skip a beat when she's jealous. Its so adorable. "What? You jealous Nessa?" I asked with a smirk. "Jealousy is not my fortae." "Hmm sure Martinez." "I'll see you later McAdams." With that she sashayed away swaying her hips away and back to her friends as always. The rythem in her hips had me memorized. I think Joanne noticed when she came back. "Girlfriend of yours?" She snarled "No just a friend." "Ok good." She smiled I smiled at Joanne knowing that I should pick one or the other. They both like me and I like both of them. Joanne confessed to me a year ago and we became friends. Nessa on the other hand was never good at hiding who she liked. Whenever that person was near her hands would get sweaty her face would be cherry red and she would fumble on her words like an adorably she little girl. I didn't like where this was going. I needed to do something before it was to late. I sense jealousy!
Tehe! here's and update! From this point on it will remain in Vanessa's POV. Also.. Please pardon any mistakes... Who was he waiting for? Why did he ask me if I was jealous? I'm not. Okay wait, maybe I am alittle jealous but that's expected right? Like the guy I have a crush on is with another girl. I still remember when I first knew I had a crush on him. _______________________________ *Flashback!!* I lived in a happy home with my brother Troy and my parents. It was peaceful, I couldnt complain. We barely fought. But, as we got older things took a turn for the worst. Dad would be at the office longer and Mom would be so upset because he would come home at 3 a.m. or never at all. "Vanessa! Troy! Come here please me and your father have to tell you something!" My mother called out to us Troy and I stepped out of our rooms simultaneously. We paused and looked at each other. Panic flowing through our faces, worry in our eyes. We knew what was going to happen. And we didn't want to be apart of it. I sighed and walked to the stairs Troy right behind me he touched my shoulders and whispered to me. "Nessa no matter what happens with them I'll still be here ok? No family drama is gonna keep me away from my sister." I was only able to nod for I was a loss for words. We descended down the stairs. My dad was in his chair next to the window and my mom was sitting on the far end of the couch near the dining room. When we reached the landing we just stood there. Hesitating on taking another step. "Troy, Vanessa. You know that your mother and I have been arguing alot lately. And you two have tried to stop some of them. And we think it isnt healthy for us or for you." My father began. "Your father and I are... Are getting a divorce." Mom said. It felt like someone hand punched me in the stomach. Hearing my parents are getting a divorce. I was a daddy's girl. My mom is my best friend. I slipped to the floor looking at my hands like if something horrible had been on them. Tears were flowing down my face. Troy helped me up and over to the couch. My dad walked over to me and attempted to kiss my forehead like he always does when Im crying. I just pushed him and everyone else away and ran out the door. I didn't know where I was going. I just kept running. Away from what just happened, away from my now broken family. I accidently bumped into someone. I didn't know who I just kept my head down and started walking fast. "Hey watch i--- Nessa?" I looked up and saw it was Jaden. My best friend, he looked at me with concern. Then anger and care. He hugged me, holding me so close to him. Stroking my long black hair. I couldnt help but hug back and cry into his chest. The amazing sent of his cologne filling my nostrils. "Nessa what happened? Who made you cry I swear I'll hurt him!" "My parents are.....are....are getting a divorce." He looked at me in shock. His now angered face turned into sympathy and compassion. He tightened his hug. I didnt want to let go. I wanted it to stay like this forever. Jaden and I together. "Vanessa. No matter what your going through. Im here and I will never leave you. Ever." *Flashback over!!* ______________________________ I stood up with my tray and walked over to the trash can and threw out my salad. When I returned to my seat I heard my name being called. I looked around in confusion. Who called me? "VANESSA!!!!!!!!!" I looked to where Jaden was sitting with that girl. Ugh! What does he want? I rose and grabbed my bag walking over to him. When I sat next to him I could feel this girl's eye's glaring at me. I just looked at her and smiled. This should be fun. OMG!!!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!
****READERS PLEASE NOTE**** THIS IS MY SISTER'S STORY...SHE HAS ASKED ME TO POST THE UPDATES FOR HER SINCE SHE NO LONGER PLAYS KAW! thank you
Its really good, but some sentences were missing a word. Some punctuation was missing. It's really interesting though, it would be a book I'd like to read.