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Mmm... The good thing about vacations is the fact that one leaves FanFiction and when they return there is a euphoria of new chapters :P...
You didn't acknowledged who the author was. Nor did you clarify. You said you copied the beginning not the title. If you neglect both of those...
There is a story by the same title if you didn't know iZ
FANGON!!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN (I know, I read it)??? DUDUDUDUDUDE, it's been way to long! iZaln
Great start. And Rozo, relax, they're just words written for other people. If you don't like em, pass then by as you scroll. iZ
Lolz thanks. Still gotta find time to type the next chapter. And storyboarding... Ugh lol. I don't wanna make the story move to fast but then...
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That's all right, mate. I got the message lol. Thanks . iZaln
Seeing the comment of the Chinese, Zaln chuckles. "Aye, I'm 70% Chinese, 30% Filipino. Hah, what's to say to that? Oh and tax cuts? Of course...
Zaln looks to Taylor. "A bit of both." Turning his attention to Gloomi, "Aye, I see. Quite true. But then again, they suffer as well. Rich as...
Nodding slowly, Zaln weighs the facts. "Eh sure, but it's the educated ones that are the tyrants. Thanks to the educated ones, we have a...
Confused, Zaln responds, "It's not the airplane, it's the homework that I have to do on the plan. As I stated, a royal pain in the arse."...
"Aye you ladies," Zaln starts, "are pretty lucky. Since I'm leaving, my mum made me ask for all mine homework assignments, and to my dismay, I've...
iZaln reads the post and says to the sleepy girl, "Aye, you've just told us who you are." iZ
iZaln logs into KaW forums and sees Irin's above post. He thinks in his mind, Whoa... What kind of mind does she have? An absured on, a voice in...
Zaln wishes Lady_Marian goodnight and gives Irin a look. He wonders what she is thinking. iZ
Lol. I adore first person since you can really get to know the character, but it's at a disadvantage since you can't see anything about another...
Very good. Your writing style... It's a nature third person inside their mind kinda story. This is the style I wanted for Dragon Fire, but I'm a...
Lolz, nice job Ninja. iZ
Zaln and Kyle are humans. And Blaze, wrong thread. And thank you Lady_Marian, but I'm going to be in the Philippines for most of December so I...