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Yea!!
I sence this story gonna go along way
Nice new stuff very good
When's next chapter out
Very nice no need for critcizem here!!
This was a very good story when iread it nice
Nice story utho very nice
I know I just got bored so I had to fail somehow but still.. Well bye all peoplz me out of here
My gosh that's a fail
Yes im slow I know lol..
Hmm only three editors...
Lol
Nice ideas name Matt discriptoin the bad guy
Hmm he should meet someone mesterous who tells him about the rest of the stuff at the gas station
Next chapter is awsome
Lol
Finish story don't fell bad just go for it!!
But still it's very good it just needs a little tweek to make it a pwning story
Take a little more time just take a hour to wright a good chapter or two
Put me in as a air force rouge