Separate names with a comma.
Hard to write in third language. Sounds much better in my head.
I actually liked my ending. Anyways here is another one Lie to me tender without an end so I wouldn't wonder why. Build me a castle in faraway...
@ Scrap Ha! The backwards trick is awesome! Don't like the poem much though... a lil too jumpy for my taste. But it's very creative
oh gawd....
Looks like the thread is dead. Anyways, here is one of mine.. Goodbye, my friend, until we meet again You're in my heart and in my blood forever....
Goodbye, my friend, until we meet again You're in my heart and in my blood forever. Foretold parting - no one to blame. Just means reunion closer...
Nice thread Static