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"Yeah," Irin agreed. She winced alittle as the stitches were being taken out, but was surprised that it didn't hurt much.
Irin relizes that Star doesn't mean to hurt her. "Oh," she says, a little embarrassed. "Alright then." Irin notices Seth and says hello to him.
You have too much going on at once. It's hard to figure everything else. Be more discriptive, and don't leave out any events. If Character A was...
Irin doesn't hear Seth. She only sees Star with the daggar.
"Good night Lady!" Irin says, as she turns to get her mop. Then Star grabs her arm, and takes out a knief. It takes a moment for Irin to relize...
"Its alright, Star. I'll do it. It shouldn't take too much work if I can find my Potion-I mean cleaning product that works really well." Irin bit...
Irin looked at Marian and said, "Of course you were only kidding." Irin smiled.
"Hmmm...I suppose so." Irin said. She smiled, then took another look at the floor and relized she had some cleaning to do.
Irin was sad that GlooMi had to leave, and hoped she could come back soon. "Honostly, Star, Im fine. Thanks to you." after a pause she adds,...
Irin laughed. "Its not my fault." She said to GlooMi. "I forgot about." Irin turns to Star and says, "Im fine. More than fine actually. I have my...
Irin remembered nothing, and everyone was confusing her. She backed away, overwhelmed, and almost stepped on something. It was a sword with the...
Irin concentrates hard, but can't remember the man's name. "I'm terribly sorry, but I don't remember. I seem to have forgotten certain things...
Irin watched as another strange man walked in. His face looked familier, but she still couldn't place it. Then she noticed Lady Marian. She waved...
Irin looks at the strange man, not sure how he could have known. "Im fine, thanks." she says. "Can I get you anything?"
Irin becomes annoyed. If the man couldn't see, she had no idea where she was. She got up anyway and said, "Can I take your order?"
"Strange..." Irin thought. He didn't look like his old self, yet somehow, Irin knew. Instead of lying down, she struggled to sit up, wondering...
Irin came to a short time later and found they her wound was bandaged and the bleeding had nearly stopped. It still hurt, though. She tried to...
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In the distance, I heard some police sirens. They wailed on and on, echoing in my mind, impressing the sound into my memories. I wouldn't be...