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Irin feels as though someone has just made fun of her, though she has no idea where this feeling came from. 'Strange,' she thinks to herself....
Great chapter!
Almost falling asleep with her iPod on her forehead, Irin wills herself to stay awake. She tries to write something, then taps the submit button,...
Irin wonders why izaln is looking at her in a strange way, but is too tired to ask why he is doing that. Her thoughts drift to something absurd,...
I meant to say first, not third. Mistakes like these happen when your tired. G'night lady! I should probably get some sleep too.
I love writing and reading in third. But it is a pain when you want to switch P.O.V's. I try conquering that by making it like the main character...
I felt like posting some poetry, so here's a lulleby I wrote. Hush, little one. Lay down your fragile head. As your heavy heart, lifts the...
Hmmm...writing style...it kinda like your way with words. Word placemeant, vocabulary, things like that. The better the flow of words, the btter...
I really like it lady, especially your writing style! Great job!
Thanks guys. I've been setting up the whole iZ/Zendrick/Rebethon thing since the beggining, but it was zaln's bio that sparked the idea.
I was remembering the good times back when mother and father were still alive when his harsh whisper caught me off gaurd. "Irin!" Niri was...
Awesome. Roleplaying. I used to be good at that.
Hehehe.... -poke-
I went down to the kitchen soon after that. My stomach rumbled as I grabed some soup and headed to the dineing hall. Renethon was there. Oh...
It's great so far, stora! Can't wait to read more!
Aww, thanks Fanged. But I don't think that's true. I think your pretty good.
Hmmm...mines rather long, so it's okay if you don't want to, buy I'd love it if you rated innocence. It's not finished, but I would like to see...
Name: Jay. She doesn't remember her last name. Age:16 Location: Jay lives on the streets of a big city. Appearance: Light Brown hair that flows...