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Irin sheathed her sword and watched Gloomi walk in. She looked sad, so Irin asked, "Is everything alright?" Then she saw a second Star. She...
Sorry this is late. Let me know if I need to add more or not. Slowly, silently, I strung my bow. My father's watchful eyes studied my every...
"Umm...there's just one problem with that. We ran out of Writers Rum days ago. Instead I gave you spiked Apple juice. You were just to drunk to...
Irin, jolted away from her daydreaming, looked at the meteor in the cafe. She then locked her gaze on cheese. "Cheese," she said, ever so calmly,...
Thanks Stora, and yeah, I didnt notice how it was like a poem. @Star, not very long. Mostly because almost none of it was word for word. Only the...
Irin yawned. She noticed Star holding down a button and trying to do something with duct tape. "What are you doing?" Occ// Wow, that sounds...
Not inactive. Just busy. I surprised myself. I thought it would be another week before I got this next part out. Finally out of my writing slump.
Chapter 3: To Fail I opened my eyes and shivered. Darkness confronted me, as did the sound of the gentle tap of water hitting earth. Apparently...
Ummm...as soon as I sort some stuff out. I lost a lot of data on my iPod, so I'm not sure.
-out- Hey guys! Sorry for not being around. Life has a funny way of catching up with you. -In- Irin was trying to figure out what was going on....
It's been awhile since she's shown her face in the cafe. She almost didn't want to see what damage the cafe had taken in her absence, but she was...
Irin shrugged. "As long as A) I don't have to pay for the damages and B) the FBI doesn't break down my door, then whatever floats your boat." she...
Great job! Confuseing...but still, great job.
Oh...an NEW new chapter. Not a I-haven't-been-on-in-days new chapter. Right...
Check your feedback, Cheese.
"Ummm...perhaps we should evacuate?" Irin said...she still wasn't sure what the contraption was.
Irin blinks, then shrugs. She limps to the counter and dumps the coffee in the sink.
It's great stora!
Irin glares at Star, then accepts the check without a work. She wasn't up for argueing today. "Thats it." Irin said. "Starting tomorrow I get rid...
It's great cheese! You're writing is definately improving!