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I COMMAND YOU LOWLY SLAVE!!!
Get this book published!
Ok. I'll try to implement them into chapter 2
I don't have a PC. And I haven't seen anyone on it for a while.
Sorry, people don't go on writers cafe much. I did go on writers café. And I didn't want there to be 3 threads...
I mean feedback* lol
Btw I know the chapter title needs to be more centered.
Please post your thoughts about my story and how I should improve it.
lolmakeacenterAbandoned Kingdom lolMy name's Visceral, Visceral Goldsmith. I'm a commander in the Kingdom army. Me and my men have been traveling...
Nice, I'm pasting it to my thread so I can use it when I get to the more serious part of the story. Look at my thread for more details on...
Ok.
Oh, and the story will tell you firsthand what it's like being the spies and soldiers that we all command in an EB.
Hey everyone, I'm planning on making a story called "A Day in the Life of an Epic Battle" which is a half-comedy short story which I hope to...
Hmm. I need to join a clan with just 1 other strong person and we can go through the EB and record everything.
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I mean what it says, like the female troll, so I can put in things like: "We were watching the doorway as a massive female troll emerged, making...
Winrar? O.o this should be in best of with its companion.
Ok, though please read my signup and give him a big part (if you can). If giving him a big part needs more information about him, I'll be glad to...
Hmm. I don't go on this section. But still, it would be good comedy that expresses what everyone feels during an EB- like wtf?!?! How do you...
Okami- it was the shapeshifting demon named rau or something. please read what I just posted- you'll like it, and it may give you more things to...