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... So what has happened to your mood lately? Have problems in your home, parents sick...? What exactly has made you all cynical for the past 2...
So far there isn't enough chapters to write a critique. Also, you have around 5 threads about your story...
Any answer Feather? And did my other answer answer your question? (overusage of "answer" ughhh.)
At a certain point you said something about oral sex, and I've never heard of oral sex, so I told you to explain. That is all.
What was that about those three questions?
Ummmm, what? And btw, I told you my age. You can also find out my age by listening to my vocabulary.... Feather, what happened to you? When I...
But how will you get feedback?!??
So feather, did that answer your question?
I'll try. Is it fine that while she's female, she's still like other demons in voice and thoughts...?
Thanks colonel.
As I sai- Ahhhhh*
As I said, Ahhhhhh.
I find sex as a thing that needs to be done, and I haven't grown the hormones to start getting attracted to females so I'm kind of neutral on sex....
As I said, look at my revised story on page one...
If you want she can be the lead demon, because in the prologue the demon uses it's claws to stab through the human's head :?
So Anon's "It's all about the money" should be deleted.
Just look at my revised story on page one.
There's no such thing as KaW,*
Fail by Phoenix imposter :P
I meant to write: "And finding nothing familiar, I demanded" Whoops...