Separate names with a comma.
Do you remember me, Feather.
Good.
Called Atlantric: Unknown? That's it? Thanks. It sounds right.
Though pretty artistic. But still... This is a nine plus game.
Wow. Your clan wall art is pretty perverted, Feather.
B-but! Of course you know me! We friended each other! I just came bak active after almost a year. I was on when Stora finished her story......
Me or Bremen?
Uhhh. And hi Bremen. Are you new?
He was joking. Supposedly.
Did this guy think this was Off Topic or something?
Much better! The last paragraph is... One sentence long. It's kind of a run-on. Add some periods. The parentheses are fine, but when you right the...
I'm going to check it soon. Now it looks more "normal sized", I'm jus preoccupied at the moment.
Got to go now... Be on tomorrow evening.
That's around normal size for an intro. If you're doing a short intro, yours'll do.
Oh, btw, an Epilogue is after the ending... Here goes: Rivulets of rain water ran down my face, plastering my hair to my forehead. I checked my...
Lol. I would recommend you make it a lil bit more descriptive, since its moving really quickly, so I don't know what's going on. Also, I'll post...
That sounds good, but would need an active moderator to focus on Ff specifically. Too bad Benny is gone as a mod. :(
FF is dying. We need to take drastic measures so we get the possibility of new members. If we put it on AT we'll get spammed and trolled, but we...
[img] How is this possible?
Hey, now that you're here, post on ISS-Tigress wall. She'll switch it.