Separate names with a comma.
Oh, and I stopped reading after you wrote: "I'm Briar Sanders, I'm 16, and my ferternal twin sister is my best friend" YOU DONT EVER DO THAT...
@d_bo Her clan sucks too....No wonder!!
No. xD I'm just not in the mood to read something long, plus my CC and AC are busy atm, so, yeah. :lol:
Tl;Dr, but I skimmed and it looks good.
Lol, just saying.
This is really good! You could turn this into a good story, even. Nice job, just watch the grammer!
This actually has some real potential. You can just keep editing and revising, and slowly, it'll get better and better! I'd like to see it after...
Re: PostQuestionsHere That's what I mean. I can't grow because I have no gold. xD
Re: PostQuestionsHere Okay, because everyone calls me a noob for my stats, but I'm currently getting strip farmed so I have no gold to upgrade...
Re: PostQuestionsHere What determines if you are a "noob" or not? Stats? The way you act?
Chapter two up! :D
••Chapter Two•• Sometimes kids at school call me a loser. I don't mind--untill She came along. She was tall and pretty, and everyone seemed to...
I put chapter one up on my story! Check it out!
Chapter one up!! The chapters are ment to be short, by the way.
••Chapter One•• It's been three years since the accident. Three years since everything I knew got washed away, gone all of a sudden, not waiting...
Why is this crap in FF?
@Phee....I wrote this is (I think) 4th grade xD So I just kinda slapped it on here.....lmao
Who? Me or Celestia?
Oh yeah, so you're going to go and hate on everything I do and make.