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I always forgot his name, but he was a good protagonist
I'm someone!
You FINALLY posted a new chapter!;)
Yay!!!;)
Post more!
Post your ten comandments, include lots of though's and thine's
OMG distance, you actually had THIS much time! Lol!;)
I can so picture it as a movie
That has got to be my favorite part!
You should make a sequel!!!;)
Lol, who the hell is samuel!
You have displeased me with two words out of... How many words are in your story?
Is there a villan? Cause' I normally like villains.
I really like your poem!
I loved the whole thing except for when she said "I love you too my dear Gnath." Take away the "my dear" and I loved the whole thing!
I'm writing this chapter, but I'll make sure they all make it out safely
Opinion noted
I'm not open to ideas on chapter eleven though, I'm in the process of writing it.
Any guesses on what will happen? •Will the arrow hit Talon? •Will Shorlorn block the arrow? •Will everyone get out safely? REMINDER- I'm...