Separate names with a comma.
But I'm not a girl am I? And grammar brony sounds quite frankly dumb.
Nor do I. And they're a season behind in UK. YouTube all the way.
Personally I'd rather be a grammar Pegasus but J3acon HAD to make it unicorns.
Tired as hell and so pissed off at the world. Don't grammar unicorn me.
… That is all.
I was their, Just you know; a bit nubish. Less than I was, developing into a respectable person.
basically what Iron said. It's also so you can say that you have an influence on the longest thread alive.
Correction, not scary. I'm sorry to be blunt but it isn't scary. The key element for a story like this is tension and suspense. Of which you have...
It's easier for -Deady-'s thread, you only need to post a few letters.
The **** was predictable. The pauses are annoying. You aren't getting the emotional effect needed for this kind of story, there are several points...
I come back from France to find our Cafè is being overtaken? :O
And that's why you don't question Cheese.
Not that much, I filled it out in 2 minutes. Admittedly I made a brand new house purely for getting into the server :3 Which took me 1-2 hours…...
I guess I can show them that Saberspark video. Ballad of the brony I think… It is a hour though. Oh well.
Kate and Will? Also, that takes effort Cheese. Effort! Do you want to put me through that? I think they're 50/50. I may sway them.
With crappy free WiFi! :D Atleast I get WiFi, bad connection is better than none.
A prologue is a chapter, simply a starter chapter. A prologue should be one of your best chapters as it needs to grab a reader from the start.
By your rules I can now form an opinion of your little story. Three chapters; But I'm too le lazy, you have until Sunday night/Monday morning to...
A dessert eagle? Sounds tasty more than anything else.
Pfft, I'd like to see a child use a Desert Eagle without getting their wrist torn off. Plus, if he shot something that was powerful enough to rip...