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Aww thanks! I only thought it would be terrible because I couldn't think of ANYTHING. I have this sequence of how everything has to be in a...
@Mystique, Me? About what?
Keir used to be one if the regulars on fan fic. But he didn't write. Only read. I don't know where he went. Strange... Anyway... Take THAT...
Chapter 10: Welcome to My Nightmare It's funny how much can change within the span of a few hours. My mood, for instance. By morning my dark...
Putting the finishing touches on chapter 10! Which actually has a name now! And ended up being longer than I thought... Chapter 10: Welcome to My...
I completely agree with Mystique. Good job. Moar.
Omg, that's awesome! Seriously. Put more up, soon. Oh no. Does this mean im going to die? And does Arria ever find her father? 'cause that...
I hope it's soon. You have me hanging off a cliff hanger.
That sound...awesome! When's the next post?
@Feather, done. @Stora, Actually that was most of the chapter. I was thinking of making chapter 10 super short, then continuing with it in...
Pretty good so far. One thing you need to watch is your descriptions though. It's good to be descriptive, but not overly so. It's better to show,...
Okay, sure. But I just have to say this, because I think it's funny. I am actually writing Chapter 11 before I finish 10.
Fantabulous? Lol, thanks Feather!
Yes, it is absolutely without a doubt worth your time. Or my time at least. Because I would never have gotten half way through my book if it...
A preview of Broken, Book Two of the Innocence Series, Chapter 10: "I still can't believe you went without me." Liz said. As if I did everything...
Oh oh oh oh! Pick me! Pick me! -raises hand and jumps Up and down like a wild maniac- Moar! Moar! MOAR! The last chapter was really good.
Thanks for the support guys. It wasn't that I didn't like what I wrote, it was that I couldn't think of what to write. @Mystique, I actually...
Alright, that's it. I give up. I fold. I hate chapter 10 with a dying passion, and so I quit. It's not worth the concussion I'm getting from...
Great new part!
Are you sure your not going to post the whole story on Kaw, conq?