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"Do you remember me Irin? My name is Star. I saved your life." He says as he points at the stitches on her shoulder.
Star was not suprised at Wolf. Before the blade had even reached his throat, his dagger was poking wolf's stomach. He attempted to take a step...
"Do you remember me?" Star said to Irin. "You didn't seem to before."
Hurray!
Star greeted Marian. "Hey! I'm back!" He didn't feel safe, and had hidden a dagger in his shirt before he had left.
Star nervously entered the cafe. Through manipulation and blackmailing, he finally had gotten the charges dropped. He could once again show his...
I'm just posting a couple of suggestions...
Well, I don't know much about zombies but it looks like you are doing well. The only change I would have made at all was the repost of...
Glad you updated it. I thought you gave up on it.
I'm enjoying it. Can't wait for the next part.
Cool story
-Out- *the -In-
Star was now in true panic. His cover was blown and his freedom was on the line. "lay down and rest." He stated and dashed out tje door without...
Star finally fixed the wound as well as he could. He continued to do what he could. As a wanted criminal, he couldn't call 911. "$75,000 or Irin's...
Star could hear GlooMi's movements and her breathing faintly. Despite it, he pretended not to notice and continued to work.
Star watches silently from his hiding spot in the back room. "I can't hide forever," he thinks to himself, "but I still can't show my face. They...
There is another suggestion I would make. You shouldn't make the threads for several stories until you are ready to start it. If it's a shorter...
-Out- Is the roleplay still going on? Or is this it until the weekend? -In?-
-Out- Go to fan fiction, and click at the top to create a thread. Don't spam here. -In-
-Out- Ok, stop spamming messages to yourself. Honestly. -In-