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Now tell me... If you aren't amber then why are you continuing her stories and quoting "Avery"? Just asking...
She failed to react, so I will say that the stars were manually posted.
-Out- Don't lie you noob. There is no way to hide it. You blew your cover the second you forum posted and quoted "Avery". You are a...
"What the... My arm is healed. And to not lie. You are amberfur in disguise."
Doesn't chapter 1 remind you of Harry Potter? Trace that breaks at 17, death eaters, not very original...
Star had a plan forming. He would make sure no one found out until after. There would be some regrets after. Besides that, he had finished the...
I'm being serious when I say to PLEASE stop spamming.
"Thank you. The new one is very nice as well." Star says and takes the dress. "I see...." He comments as he examines it through a microscope,...
"And to Amberfur, notice how much of a difference punctuation makes when you speak here."
"I meant we should interrogate Irin. We should probably also examine the dress."
"I've been researching disembodied voices. Watch this!" My voice is disembodied!
"I agree lady." Star replies. "And I wonder how Irin gained that magic power... I'll go grab some rope and a chair and we'll go interrogate her."
Star glances in the front door. "Hi Lady!" He walks back in.
Star is still unable to trace the voice. "I'll be off now... To a... Um... Dentist appointment! I'm really late!" He dashes straight out the door
Star wonders why the strange voice said their 2 points twice each. "I hear a voice but can not trace it to any person, creature or object. Where...
Star looks around in confusion at the new disembodied voice. "Who was that?"
"Really? But how?" Star said with some confusion.
That's the kind of chapter I was waiting for!
"Isn't that a purple dress?" Star asks. "Or was it a different one? It wasn't me, so who did that?"
Star looks at Ady and shakes his head. "They don't get drunk here. I don't know if they even serve alcohol. By the way, the cloak and dress look...