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Chris noooo!!!!
Chestplate of The Emberstone Description: Forged my the sacred blood of Fatalis, and enchanted with the power if the Emberstone. Anyone who flees...
That's not 20 chapters! 
Wow o.O that was fast, a while story in one day
U should use quotations marks as well as commas correctly 
Pretty good so far, but your grammar is really, really crappy :( I'm a seventh grader and it wouldn't hurt to put the right capitalization and...
Lol srry, just imagined it would be a guy  Anyway, great job, but pls slow down :( I think it would b a better story that way 
I like it  Better than the other story imo. Good job, but still goin a bit fast for my taste. And one question, how did he survive spears and a...
Thnx nova 
Nvm thnx!
How do u fix it?
Fame
Anyone know why sometimes when u post something in a thread, it doesn't come out right. Like it just cuts off the rest at one random point
Srry dude, something ****** up and it wouldn't show the whole thing 
Skip the 3 failed attempts pls 
So first off, let me tell you a bit about myself. I'm not the bad guy here, I just told you I was different. My name is, I mean was Sirk Deth....
Lol 
Just asking, how is FF spam?