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Question! For my next story, should I just have you all wait then I write the whole story, or release it chapter by chapter?
Ok I will make my ratings tougher from now on though. CheeseMuffin Fading Fast A very nice story indeed! There is always a twist to the...
Nope. My person is made for stealth.
Yeah I read that. That's why I wa commenting on.
From my amateur critquing. Lady-Marian Battle Camp Series My favorite story yet. The way the words are woven together in an elegant way,...
I need to warm up writing. His skin started to burst, followed by an intense pain. He didn't dare hold it in, or be destroyed himself....
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Two chapters plus a bonus villain view.
That's okay.
Doom: If you don't like my rating, I dont care. Im new, and inexperienced. My ratings will get better.
Cheese I kinda feel like you tries to overdo it. Also the wording was kind of awkward. "It looked like an octopus, only the octopus was inside a...
Salvation is Fleeting Klassik (=1/2) I like the idea. I haven't been a critic for long, but I know a good story when I see one. The only...
Cheesedanish
IEndorsements is also an editing company. This can't be one unless you get approval from Zaln
Yup
Oh Yeah!
No it's good, my starter story turned out that way too.
Gonna try to post two chapters for next update!
Sorry, Maid of Ycha gets Not three.
Wizardry World LEGENDaRY LIoN(sry I'm o iPod) I'm sorry, but I'll have to be blunt. It needs work. There is little to know description, and not...