Separate names with a comma.
Good I missed number 1 and 2 but 3 is good
When is chapter 4 coming?
Chapter 7 Up!!!!
Kk good
Who got shot in the face
I'm just afraid it got confusing. It made sense to me. Idk about to you guys
Chapter 8 soon. Trying to keep em coming but I got stuff I gotta do to
Chapter seven out!!!
CHAPTER SEVEN Riann woke up. He looked around. Everything was black. He was strapped to a table. It looked like an operating table. Riann turned...
Yeah. Still minor spelling errors but that is same as in my story
Him and I picked up a new member
Stay tuned. Chapter seven out soon!
Thx. And Freya I love my poker
That's all bastion and marado. They are the owners
bump
And what about that smallz guy? He's sweet
Not bad. U should join iWrite Co. They can edit and help you out. Missing some punctuation and some spelling errors but overall not bad.
No1 is reading mine. I have like 37 views lmao