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I think you should try to get rid of all stats. Does that work aainst spies or only attackers? PS: why is this on FanFic?
Well, then... But still, you were probably better than I am today. I'm not actually much of a writer, more of an artist/science lover LOL
I say, that's a pretty darn good-sounding story. I like it. As a comparison of mine to yours: mine is written by a 13-yr-old (me) yours is...
I will read sed story, and I will post my feedback here.
I've read a few of those 700pagers. A story doesn't have to have "he said" or "they replied" after every single dialogue. Thtas how you keep it...
Oh yeah, ******** (name is confidential) has not been forgotten. He will reappear, don't worry.
Zap, who's your character?
"Write like the real authors," Hidden commanded. "But it gets monotonous, and this writing style is used by some of the worlds most famous...
ALERT!!!!!! Some more characters are being added to the story! I will not say who, but there will be more characters!!!!!! Anyone who Posted...
Well, I actually lost this thread and couldn't find it LOL
I am intereste in the "iRate" thing. Personally, I don't think I'll do anything if I join it, but I would like to ask, where would I find the...
Hey guys! Today, I'll be trying a different writing style. I'm not saying it will be good, but I'll try. So, anyways, enjoy! -Please post...
Nvm, Chris is Andre. I remember now
That's how I'm writing, but if you want me to dosomething differently, just ask. Luther, Horren and the others are not forgotten. Don't lose your...
I never said you had to do as others say, just giving suggestions.
Fang, will a little mistake really put you down that far? She's giving you constructive advice! To make a story successful, you have to try to...
Russian-American
Male Choice weapon - hammer with batteries attached for a slight electric charge
Sam Willins 18 Short-ish, ALWAYS wearing a sweater Special- red-dot pistol with giant muzzle bio- Usually kindof funny, but can be very serious....
Part twelve is out. Cheese out.