Separate names with a comma.
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New chapter of salvation. Irin, pleash reads it! : D
Chapter 2 - (1/2) Beginning ------------------------------------------------ It had been three days since the first round of Sickness had hit...
Errors - you occasionally forget to make some things plural, but other than that, grammar and story-wise, they're all great! : D
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I don't like "I think"... It sounds too uncertain. Btw, I feel kinda dumb asking, but seeing as you're a much more experienced writer (besides...
Cheese simply proceeded to shoot the barrel of Writer's Rum and gorged himself
Any news on Chaos? How's the odds of success for my character? :/
Cheese remembered something: "Irin, I finished Revolution! Please read Salvation, the sequel! I hope you enjoy it "
Well, GlooMi wants some caffeine, and I had to put on my armor again [img]
"I'm watching you..." All of a sudden, spotlights and machine gun turrets activated. "YOU WILL NOT GET THAT COFFEE!"
Actually, that's because the armor is huge. By the way.... DO NOT DRINK THAT COFFEE!
[img] "Oh no you don't!" Cheese shouted, and fired several warning shots
Cheese looked up, sensing a disturbance incoming. In self-defense, he raised his revolver
In the corner, Cheese was, as usual, drinking Writer's Rum and spinning his revolver around.
Ok, I'll make up the names. Expect them to be introduced in chapter 2.
Name - Chaos Age - Noone knows Appearance - always changing shape, usually just a formless shadow with two lights for eyes Bio - Part of a...
1) They do have real names, but that'll be explained later, cuz just saying their real names is too... Out of place and too fast. 2) Zap, just...
You can actually UNDERSTAND it!? K'poof! Brainfart
... Anyone?