Separate names with a comma.
But Cheese isn't as law-abiding. Raising his hand, he calls down a massive comet, decimated a good-sized chunk of the Cafe. He then proceeds to...
No I mean past and present tense. Like.... As he walks over to the boots.... And then three sentences later- As he walked over to the boots
Star, don't give this dumbass fuel for his flame... Hahah flame! I'm going to report IRONhulk if he/she posts another thread.
I like it! Just one problem - for a moment, you switched tenses.
Meanwhile, Cheese was (IRL) graphing himself when a power-outage occured immediately after he saw a little girl in a red jacket...
WOOT! Using multitasking with pandora and KaW!!! Music as you play!!! WOOOOOOOOOOT!!!
I welcome a young Writer's ideas! I'm in!
But that creates the effect! When you're so pisswd you wanna kill someone, you don't just say "I'm goin to horribly mutilate your corpse!" you...
I liek cats! I haz 2
Aww... But I like de cussing
NEW CHAPTAR!
Chapter 3 (1/3) Return ----------------------------- The next day began quite nicely for the four, a loud shrieking followed by several...
But Cheese, being a good friend of Star, just so happened to have made that particular decoy button that Rg had pressed. "Damn, you're screwed!"...
You waited two weeks to say that?
Cheese was horrible at keeping promises, and he crashed through the ceiling, leaving BLOOD ON THE FLOOR!!!!!!!!! "It's fine, just a flesh wound!"...
IRONhulk, weren't you banned from FanFic? Not banned, but threatened with banning?
QUICK QUESTION! If you were to decide how the story would end, would you choose, A) Something to do with The Numbers B) Something to do with...
Chapter 2 (2/2) Beginning ------------------------------------------------ It was their sixth day since Cerberus collapsed, and their third...
Yeah, I'ma let you finish, but... VIOLATION!
I will write the next part today if it's the last thing I do!.... Today