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Hi blade.
... I've been reading a little something special. Inside the mirror however... Okay not gonna be mean.
Please use the feedback thread! I was so close to having a clean story!
Lolz and why not? It's extremely realistic...
(chapter 17,18) Post if you want me to write a prologue
The end is posted
Chapter 18 Aynia Alena had committed the ultimate betrayal. The forces quickly surrounded our camp and took it with little force needed. Why...
Chapter 17 Aynia We ran back to camp at a dead sprint, the wind rushing past us like a wailing ghost in the night. As soon as I was within...
Well there's so many of them I can't real fir them in to the story. That's really the only way this all can work.
Lolz
Your only problem? Adjuctive use. Your showing instead of telling. Instead of giving a long dry description, try to sneak it into the story. I.e I...
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LOOOVE IT! a++
Yeah he does. You're cleared for the bio lolz!
I feel so loved DF made a RP thread for NLH!
Yay!