Separate names with a comma.
47 now I think.
Bti: that's on my list of edits
Dilly is just so awesome he can do all that
Yeahhhhh next time I'm on pc (hey I'll be able to put in edits then too) I'm gonna remove that..:
Bump
Thank you. To make it official, I will add an honourary DEAD THREAD
Oh good. Make KaW more like it used to.
I would request that you let this thread die and that you run any future story through a writing company first.
Re: The Currently-Untitled-Story I know. Btw if you tell anyone what happens I'll farm you. Don't let dilly persuade you otherwise.
I suspect 99.9% of people who read this will think along the lines I do... Spelling errors, unclear, and not entertaining.
There's a bunch of grammar/spelling and tense errors... Badly layed out... Everyone will laugh, but in pity not enjoyment.
just minor there... Troop(s). this one is just WHATT?? another WHATT?? Also no paragraphing or dialouge at all.
It's not even a story if you can't make sense of it because of so many grammar errors.
I'm sorry bit.... Fail and that's apart from all the grammar and spelling errors...
Re: The Currently-Untitled-Story Shush maki you already know what happens
Seriously, I get squad one. I can actually spell.
20k ally or base plunder?
The Cake is a Lie
Re: The Currently-Untitled-Story Put sections 2 & 3 on