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Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback Hmmm... I don't remember... I have all of the bios in notes but no names. And the thread got deleted cuz some...
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback What do you mean?
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback No actually it was the tone. I'm looking for someone who's a mix of dark and childlike. Yours is neither lolz
I cannot write poetry despite how hard I try Whenever I attempt it, the words just seem to die My little couplet says it all
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback Ok, will be writing later today. I have already chosen my main character from a bio that was written... Two...
Lolz
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback Post until the story starts. Out of all the bios I receive, I will pick 2-4 to be main characters. The rest...
I liked it
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback It's ok FW. It's right under the one before it i just hate it wen they're on 2 different pages!
Bumpity this is good writing even if i don't agree with you.
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback Well then copy what you wrote, hit cancel, look at what I wanted, then hit reply again and write some more!...
Re: The Labyrinth Sign Up/Feedback *sigh* one post pleez
“The strength of an empire is not in the people and their rights, but in those who rule It.” the cold voice echoed throughout the factory. “The...
Lolz... I guess, it just didn't flow right to me... Whatever you're a better writer than me so I guess I can't be TOO persnickety. Best story on...
Excellent, except for the last sentence . TOO MANY WELLS!
Some problems with forced description. It needs to flow better. To improve this, try reading your chapter out loud. It will make a world of a...
Yay!